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WHAT IS GOOD WRITING? Considering The Sender, Receiver, and Message Patricia Moed
Writing is Communication ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],$
Do you agree? ,[object Object],[object Object]
Communication has 3 components Sender (Writer/Speaker) Message Receiver (Audience)
What Happens When Communication Breaks Down? ,[object Object]
The message doesn’t reach the receivers.  What Went Wrong?
There’s a problem with the receivers ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
There’s a problem with the sender…. ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
There’s a problem with the message
The Message Is Confusing
The Message Is Poorly Written
The Message Doesn’t Make Sense
The Message Doesn’t Match the Audience E = mc2 E = mc2
W hat Mistake Does the Writer Make In This Essay? (Hint: Compare Message & Audience)  ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Academic vs. Informal Writing ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
.  In conclusion, I hope you have learned that shoplifting is wrong from my explanation of my past "jobs" that I have pulled, when I got caught and the consequences I endured. Through it all I realized that shoplifting is bad not only because it hurts the companies you are stealing from, but it also can get you in some real trouble. I was lucky to not have to deal with the cops, others aren't so lucky. In all, through my experience with this I learned that the juice is not worth the squeeze. I hope you did too.
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P Moed: What Is Good Writing?

  • 1. WHAT IS GOOD WRITING? Considering The Sender, Receiver, and Message Patricia Moed
  • 2.
  • 3.
  • 4. Communication has 3 components Sender (Writer/Speaker) Message Receiver (Audience)
  • 5.
  • 6. The message doesn’t reach the receivers. What Went Wrong?
  • 7.
  • 8.
  • 9. There’s a problem with the message
  • 10. The Message Is Confusing
  • 11. The Message Is Poorly Written
  • 12. The Message Doesn’t Make Sense
  • 13. The Message Doesn’t Match the Audience E = mc2 E = mc2
  • 14.
  • 15.
  • 16. . In conclusion, I hope you have learned that shoplifting is wrong from my explanation of my past "jobs" that I have pulled, when I got caught and the consequences I endured. Through it all I realized that shoplifting is bad not only because it hurts the companies you are stealing from, but it also can get you in some real trouble. I was lucky to not have to deal with the cops, others aren't so lucky. In all, through my experience with this I learned that the juice is not worth the squeeze. I hope you did too.