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UNIVERSITY OF CAMBRIDGE INTERNATIONAL EXAMINATIONS
               Cambridge Checkpoint




ENGLISH                                                                                    1111/01
Paper 1                                                                   For Examination from 2012
SPECIMEN MARK SCHEME
                                                                                  1 hour 10 minutes




                           MAXIMUM MARK: 50




                    This document consists of 5 printed pages and 1 blank page.


© UCLES 2011                                                                             [Turn over
2

Question        1

   Part        Mark   Answer                                             Further Information

    (a)         1     (the iconic) red-eyed (tree frog)

    (b)         1     slighter and / or smaller

                      surroundings / (the influence of) environment(al
    (c)         1
                      factors) / temperature / humidity

  Total         3



Question        2

   Part        Mark   Answer                                             Further Information

                      calm / peaceful / not easily provoked
    (a)         1
                      Do not accept: serene.

    (b)         1     thinking about / contemplating / pondering

    (c)         1     characteristic / individual / unique / striking

                      blowing up / distending / dilating / swelling /
    (d)         1
                      pumping up / puffing up

Total           4




© UCLES 2011                                      1111/01/SM/12
3

Question        3

Part           Mark   Answer                                            Further Information

                                                                        Award 2 marks if 11–14 of the
                                                                        missing punctuation marks are
                                                                        in the correct place.

                                                                        Award 1 mark if 6–10 of the
                                                                        missing punctuation marks are
                      “I would like to buy a tree frog,” said the       in the correct place.
                                    customer.
                                                                        Award 0 marks if 0–5 of the
                2
                      “Are you looking for something unusual?”          missing punctuation marks are
                      asked the pet retailer. “We have some             in the correct place.
                      interesting captive-bred specimens.”
                                                                        Comma, question mark and
                                                                        full stop must be inside the
                                                                        speech marks.

                                                                        Accept single or double
                                                                        speech marks.

Total           2



Question        4

Part           Mark   Answer                                            Further Information

                      e.g. Green tree frogs, which have a distinctive
                1
                      song, live in the United States.

Total           1



Question        5

   Part        Mark   Answer                                            Further Information

                                                                        Accept any suitable
                                                                        connective including e.g.
                      e.g. Green tree frogs make good pets although
                1                                                       since, as. The sentence must
                      they are most active in the evenings.
                                                                        make sense in the context of
                                                                        the passage.

Total           1




© UCLES 2011                                    1111/01/SM/12                              [Turn over
4

Question        6

   Part        Mark   Answer                                             Further Information

                      When the writer began to keep tree frogs, he       both needed for mark
                      kept the large and placid White’s; now he is
                1
                      more experienced, he keeps the iconic red-eyed     Accept any other suitable
                      tree frog.                                         verb.

Total           1



Question        7

   Part        Mark   Answer                                             Further Information

                      Dragon-flies – top of wall
                      Toads – among brambles
                      Geckos – in cracks (high up the wall)
    (a)         6
                      Crane-flies – among the leaves
                      Moths – (withered) plaster
                      Beetles – all over the place; everywhere

Total           6



Question        7

   Part        Mark   Answer                                             Further Information

                      2 marks – summary including at least 4 points in
                      mostly well-organised, accurate sentences.
                      1 mark – summary including 1–3 points in
                      mostly well-organised, accurate sentences.

                      or

                      4 or more points with some inaccuracies in
    (b)         2     organisation and sentences.

                      or

                      4 or more points, mostly lifted from text and
                      noticeably over length.

                      0 mark – summary includes no relevant points
                      and / or incoherent sentences.

Total           2




© UCLES 2011                                   1111/01/SM/12
5

                                              Section B: Writing (Information Texts)

8

     PURPOSE AND                  TEXT STRUCTURE                SENTENCE STRUCTURE                    PUNCTUATION                         SPELLING
       AUDIENCE

The tone is appropriate to     Material presented               Fluent, beginning to use a       Uses a range of                  Uses virtual correctness
the ideas and is sustained.    coherently with introduction     range of structural features     punctuation correctly and        over a range of vocabulary
                               and conclusion and in an         for effect.                      with confidence.                 including more complex
Ideas and content are          effective order that                                                                               and difficult words.
developed in detail to         establishes the text type.       Control of complex               Secure use of commas to
create a clear and                                              sentences and the position       mark clauses.
consistent relationship        Well crafted paragraphs          of clauses to focus
between writer and reader.     contribute to control of the     attention although may not
                               text.                            always be consistent.
                         6/7                              6/7                           6/7                                   5                              4

The tone is appropriate for    The material is generally        Uses a range of sentence         Uses full stops correctly.       A few spelling errors,
purpose and is largely         coherent and in sensible         structures with some             Some range of punctuation        mostly of more difficult
sustained.                     order, with an attempt at        confidence.                      as needed, used correctly,       words.
                               an introduction and                                               but generally limited.
Relevant ideas and content     conclusion.
are chosen and developed
with some detail.              Paragraphs are used to
                               structure the text and are
                               generally helpful.
                         4/5                            4/5                               4/5                                 4                              3

Writer’s tone is established   The material is clear, but       Limited or partially effective   A number of errors               A number of errors OR
but lacks detail.              not developed coherently         use of complex structures.       including occasional full        spells a simple vocabulary
                               and may be presented in a                                         stop (evidence of comma          correctly.
Some awareness of              random order.                    Mostly simple or                 splicing).
audience may be shown,                                          compound structures
though not consistently.       There may be an attempt          based on a variety of
                               at an introduction and/or a      connectives including –
                               conclusion.                      and, but, so

                               Paragraphs may not be
                               shown.
                         2/3                             2/3                              2/3                            2/3                                 2

Little understanding of the    Little understanding of how      Sentence structure often         Sentences rarely correctly       Many errors including a
purpose or audience of the     to present a text.               grammatically incorrect.         marked. A generally very         range of simple words.
text.                                                                                            erratic use of punctuation
                                                                                                 marks.
                           1                               1                                1                                 1                              1



Award 0 where performance fails to meet the lowest description.




© UCLES 2011                                                         1111/01/SM/12
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Cambridge checkpoint english p1 specimen mark scheme 2012

  • 1. UNIVERSITY OF CAMBRIDGE INTERNATIONAL EXAMINATIONS Cambridge Checkpoint ENGLISH 1111/01 Paper 1 For Examination from 2012 SPECIMEN MARK SCHEME 1 hour 10 minutes MAXIMUM MARK: 50 This document consists of 5 printed pages and 1 blank page. © UCLES 2011 [Turn over
  • 2. 2 Question 1 Part Mark Answer Further Information (a) 1 (the iconic) red-eyed (tree frog) (b) 1 slighter and / or smaller surroundings / (the influence of) environment(al (c) 1 factors) / temperature / humidity Total 3 Question 2 Part Mark Answer Further Information calm / peaceful / not easily provoked (a) 1 Do not accept: serene. (b) 1 thinking about / contemplating / pondering (c) 1 characteristic / individual / unique / striking blowing up / distending / dilating / swelling / (d) 1 pumping up / puffing up Total 4 © UCLES 2011 1111/01/SM/12
  • 3. 3 Question 3 Part Mark Answer Further Information Award 2 marks if 11–14 of the missing punctuation marks are in the correct place. Award 1 mark if 6–10 of the missing punctuation marks are “I would like to buy a tree frog,” said the in the correct place. customer. Award 0 marks if 0–5 of the 2 “Are you looking for something unusual?” missing punctuation marks are asked the pet retailer. “We have some in the correct place. interesting captive-bred specimens.” Comma, question mark and full stop must be inside the speech marks. Accept single or double speech marks. Total 2 Question 4 Part Mark Answer Further Information e.g. Green tree frogs, which have a distinctive 1 song, live in the United States. Total 1 Question 5 Part Mark Answer Further Information Accept any suitable connective including e.g. e.g. Green tree frogs make good pets although 1 since, as. The sentence must they are most active in the evenings. make sense in the context of the passage. Total 1 © UCLES 2011 1111/01/SM/12 [Turn over
  • 4. 4 Question 6 Part Mark Answer Further Information When the writer began to keep tree frogs, he both needed for mark kept the large and placid White’s; now he is 1 more experienced, he keeps the iconic red-eyed Accept any other suitable tree frog. verb. Total 1 Question 7 Part Mark Answer Further Information Dragon-flies – top of wall Toads – among brambles Geckos – in cracks (high up the wall) (a) 6 Crane-flies – among the leaves Moths – (withered) plaster Beetles – all over the place; everywhere Total 6 Question 7 Part Mark Answer Further Information 2 marks – summary including at least 4 points in mostly well-organised, accurate sentences. 1 mark – summary including 1–3 points in mostly well-organised, accurate sentences. or 4 or more points with some inaccuracies in (b) 2 organisation and sentences. or 4 or more points, mostly lifted from text and noticeably over length. 0 mark – summary includes no relevant points and / or incoherent sentences. Total 2 © UCLES 2011 1111/01/SM/12
  • 5. 5 Section B: Writing (Information Texts) 8 PURPOSE AND TEXT STRUCTURE SENTENCE STRUCTURE PUNCTUATION SPELLING AUDIENCE The tone is appropriate to Material presented Fluent, beginning to use a Uses a range of Uses virtual correctness the ideas and is sustained. coherently with introduction range of structural features punctuation correctly and over a range of vocabulary and conclusion and in an for effect. with confidence. including more complex Ideas and content are effective order that and difficult words. developed in detail to establishes the text type. Control of complex Secure use of commas to create a clear and sentences and the position mark clauses. consistent relationship Well crafted paragraphs of clauses to focus between writer and reader. contribute to control of the attention although may not text. always be consistent. 6/7 6/7 6/7 5 4 The tone is appropriate for The material is generally Uses a range of sentence Uses full stops correctly. A few spelling errors, purpose and is largely coherent and in sensible structures with some Some range of punctuation mostly of more difficult sustained. order, with an attempt at confidence. as needed, used correctly, words. an introduction and but generally limited. Relevant ideas and content conclusion. are chosen and developed with some detail. Paragraphs are used to structure the text and are generally helpful. 4/5 4/5 4/5 4 3 Writer’s tone is established The material is clear, but Limited or partially effective A number of errors A number of errors OR but lacks detail. not developed coherently use of complex structures. including occasional full spells a simple vocabulary and may be presented in a stop (evidence of comma correctly. Some awareness of random order. Mostly simple or splicing). audience may be shown, compound structures though not consistently. There may be an attempt based on a variety of at an introduction and/or a connectives including – conclusion. and, but, so Paragraphs may not be shown. 2/3 2/3 2/3 2/3 2 Little understanding of the Little understanding of how Sentence structure often Sentences rarely correctly Many errors including a purpose or audience of the to present a text. grammatically incorrect. marked. A generally very range of simple words. text. erratic use of punctuation marks. 1 1 1 1 1 Award 0 where performance fails to meet the lowest description. © UCLES 2011 1111/01/SM/12
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