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Suitable for target audience?
 The setting appeals to the target audience

 I think that if you make sure that a more adult version of
  Alice in Wonderland. Otherwise it may not appeal to for
  16-25 year olds.

 Suitable for target audience because students will respond
  well to entropic elements, finding it almost comical.

 I believe it is suitable for the chosen age sector.
What do you think about the
      original idea?
 Great idea, the mixture of dream and reality is an idea
  that interests many.

 Possible a few more locations

 Original idea screams creativity.

 I think it’s a clever perspective.
Does it sound achievable
  with college equipment?
 Will be difficult to transition into dreams

 Some of the special effects may not be achievable with
  college cameras

 Use drama costumes for more abstract atmosphere

 With the equipment available it may be difficult
Does it sound realistic and
          plausible?
 To the target audience I think it would sell well.

 Maybe have some performance based shots

 I think the video will sell well to the target audience

 You have obviously put a lot of research into it
Do our locations sound and
        look right?
 Possible more locations

 Perfect location

 Possible locations: Streets, Hospital, Castle

 The forest setting fits perfectly with the style of song
   We gained some good feedback and many people believed that the idea of
    the music video was good as it will target our audience well. they also
    believed that the inspirations and influences linked in well with the song by
    Sarah J Johnson.



   Our feedback was also negative with people commenting on the camera
    equipment not being able to make the exact angles and editing sequences.
    Therefore we decided that we need to make the camera work more simple
    and easier to create.



   The feedback also stated that our story-line was very realistic and the video
    can be made.

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Pitch feedback

  • 1. Feedback The Pitch
  • 2. Suitable for target audience?  The setting appeals to the target audience  I think that if you make sure that a more adult version of Alice in Wonderland. Otherwise it may not appeal to for 16-25 year olds.  Suitable for target audience because students will respond well to entropic elements, finding it almost comical.  I believe it is suitable for the chosen age sector.
  • 3. What do you think about the original idea?  Great idea, the mixture of dream and reality is an idea that interests many.  Possible a few more locations  Original idea screams creativity.  I think it’s a clever perspective.
  • 4. Does it sound achievable with college equipment?  Will be difficult to transition into dreams  Some of the special effects may not be achievable with college cameras  Use drama costumes for more abstract atmosphere  With the equipment available it may be difficult
  • 5. Does it sound realistic and plausible?  To the target audience I think it would sell well.  Maybe have some performance based shots  I think the video will sell well to the target audience  You have obviously put a lot of research into it
  • 6. Do our locations sound and look right?  Possible more locations  Perfect location  Possible locations: Streets, Hospital, Castle  The forest setting fits perfectly with the style of song
  • 7. We gained some good feedback and many people believed that the idea of the music video was good as it will target our audience well. they also believed that the inspirations and influences linked in well with the song by Sarah J Johnson.  Our feedback was also negative with people commenting on the camera equipment not being able to make the exact angles and editing sequences. Therefore we decided that we need to make the camera work more simple and easier to create.  The feedback also stated that our story-line was very realistic and the video can be made.