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Copywriting
for startups
@ArturJablonski
nobody understands the cloud
Just ask Jennifer
Or typical American
And here’s why:
IT people don’t
know how
to explain what
they do
So what?
It doesn’t
matter!
People need to
understand the
benefits, not the
technology
Focus on
the copy
Copy dictates the design
“Writing is overlooked as a game changing skill.
If you can practice your writing skills and pay
attention to great writers, that will pay off
significantly over time. Improving your writing
skills is probably one of the best things a
founder can do.”
Jason Fried, 37signals
So, Here are 5 tips
how to write A
better copy:
#1: write for
your buddy
(never use the word „synergy” again, please)
Everyone on internet is your friend!
Talk with them the proper way.
There’s no need for official tone
#2: Write in the
active voice
Our brains
can’t process
passive voice
properly
It always makes it
into active voice.
So skip the middle man!
#3 Be briefGo straight to the point. Focus on the consumer.
Millenials can’t focus for
more than 8 seconds!
And they only care about
one thing…
What’s in it
for me?
WRONG!
„We are 3D printed objects gallery”
GOOD!
„Here designers just like you can present
and sell their 3D printed work”
#4: BE CONCRETE
Nobody likes the marketing copy – do you?	
  
„We are here to provide you with the best possible
offer and want to give value far greater than…”
Blah, blah, blah
4 words are enough!
Ipod: Thousand songs in your Pocket
Google: Find information you need
etc.
#5 Show me why
I need you
Consumer don’t
exactly buy what
you sell…
…they buy
what they can get
out of you!
Not a single line about cloud!
What matters is safety and access.
Questions?
@Arturjablonski
Fb.me/agjablonski

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