Evaluation Presentation - print

1. Evaluation Sarah Benjamin

3. Some of these conventions I have used consist of: Gutters, Date, Web address, Advertisements, Bold headings and a Masthead.

4. I Have placed examples of our mastheads ‘Flava’ that we earlier produced to show the difference of design and formality between our and those already on the market today

6. Wrote about issues and stories that our target audience can relate to

7. Maintained common conventions of newspapers but in a more exciting style

9. Sub Section on the front page

10. Editorial

11. Slogan: ‘Your local youth newspaper’

12. Informal contents name ‘what’s hot’

13. More topics on the inside page with page numbers so it allows them to turn to what ever story they want with the use of colours so it stands out and seems separate from the articles I have written

16. ‘hip, young, fresh’ which is an ideology of our target audience

17. Different use of Fonts and designs gives the poster a bigger impact as it stands out more

18. The use of capital letters which many posters don’t do, which immediately grab peoples attention whilst walking byFinal Product Poster Beck’s Poster

20. Clearly state what it advertising for example a local youth newspaper

21. Mentioned our product is free as a way of grabbing more teenager attention to going to get a copy

23. Advertsiements

24. Links

25. Pictures

26. Articleshttp://06whhs12e1.blogspot.com/2009/11/web-page-site.html Challenges to other website: Range of colours Welcome notice to viewers Very informing Promote our newspaper well poll

30. Has a connotative meaning of young, fun, teenagers e.g alcohol, exciting news,

31. camera angles,

33. Not for certain teenager so not biased but for all as relates to all young people

34. Audience-

35. People who buy the commodities -Aim at young people aimed 15 to 18 years old

37. Whilst producing my newspaper I made sure I took into consideration the fact I had to produce a poster and website so I could think of ways I could include this within my newspaper and also links in my website and poster.

38. In my newspaper I produced an article on a night club ‘Faces’ and thought within this article I could include our website address in red at the bottom of the article so my target audience could then visit our website to find out more information.

39. I have decided to use the same masthead and slogan on our poster, website and newspaper so people could identify it as the Flava logo.

41. I linked our newspaper with our website as in our research into newspapers and there website I identified that although they have there articles in print form they still provide it for those to read on the internet so i then went down this route

42. Informal theme throughout

43. Same font and style of writing I kept the same on each individual product

44. Print screen of our newspaper on the website homepage so if people were unable to purchase a newspaper they could therefore view it on the internet

45. Rollover image of our advertisements which are both on our newspaper and poster

46. Used same pictures on my newspaper on my website to show connection

48. We carried out a questionnaire which enabled us to find out exactly what our target audience wanted in a new youth newspaper: http://06whhs12e1.blogspot.com/2009/09/questionnaire.html

49. Learnt it is the most crucial grounding of any product in order for it to be successful

50. Made sure we asked people other than our peers and friend to prevents our results being biased

51. Good to get different opinions as when showing others our product they noticed things that we weren’t aware of and made valid contributions e.g

52. GOOD POINTS

54. Flava logo stands out an dominates the page as it the whole length of the page

55. The colour blue is very attractive and stands our on the brick background

56. States it free so its informative

57. Use of red to place emphasises and to highlight as it a very dominant colour

58. Include web address showing people that there a website which allows people to further there knowledge of what Flava about

59. Slogan is very large so can easily be read

60. Fact that there a brick wall means will be more tempted to look

61. Informal languageBad points No pictures of the newspaper so people wouldn’t know what your trying to advertise No statements of what our newspaper includes It looks plain

63. The masthead is very attractive and stand out on the page

64. The fact there is a slogan ‘ your local youth newspaper’ shows it for a certain audience so would persuade people to buy it

65. Good use of pictures which relate to the articles/ stories

66. Attractive advertisement about a club which is good as gives you places to go and is informative

67. Multiple stories on various topics

68. Consistent colours used throughout

70. More pictures on second page

71. Some things looked to squashed on the page

72. Advertisement takes up to much of the page towards the bottom

74. Not to much information on homepage clear in what the newspapers about

75. Includes advertisement and print screen of your newspaper allow people to view it

76. Use of various colours maintains your attention

77. Picture of club faces show what on around Essex

78. Background very dominant and really stands out on the page

79. Gets viewers involved e.g. include a poll

80. Good use of advertisements

81. Provide weekly articles on the website to be read

82. Roll over pictures and search barBad points Font is bland

84. Photo shop – This helped me in the production of my newspaper, advertisements and website .To begin with I only had basic knowledge of how to use this program but as time went on I learnt to used it independently and was able to produce a whole newspaper myself, it also helped me in my construction which I showed on the blog how much I develop.

85. http://06whhs12e1.blogspot.com/2009/12/development-and-construction-of-front.html

87. Bloggerand the internet- used this program to explain every stage of the development of the coursework including research, development of my main product (Newspaper) and my ancillary texts (poster and website). The internet itself helped me to carry out a lot of extensive research into newspapers, posters and websites E.g. site such as Wikipedia

88. Camera- enabled us to take good quality picture, allowed us to zoom and reverse zoom and take shots from various angles

89. http://06whhs12e1.blogspot.com/2009/12/original-pictures.html

90. Dreamweaver – this enabled me to produce a website efficiently and independently. Being able to produce pictures, articles, advertisement and many more