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Writing Survival Kit: Starter Pack
Ariesa Domingo
What is WRITING?
Survival Guide # 1: Get Started: Emergency Tips
•  What	
  does	
  your	
  protagonist	
  want?	
  
•  What	
  morally	
  significant	
  ac7ons	
  has	
  your	
  protagonist	
  taken	
  
towards	
  that	
  goal?	
  
•  What	
  unexpected	
  consequences	
  ramp	
  up	
  the	
  emo7onal	
  energy	
  
of	
  the	
  story?	
  
•  What	
  details	
  from	
  the	
  se4ng,	
  dialog,	
  and	
  tone	
  help	
  you	
  tell	
  the	
  
story?	
  
•  What	
  morally	
  significant	
  choice	
  does	
  your	
  protagonist	
  make	
  at	
  
the	
  climax	
  of	
  the	
  story?	
  
Show,	
  don’t	
  
(just)	
  tell.	
  
Tips…
•  Keep	
  a	
  notebook.	
  	
  
•  Write	
  on	
  a	
  regular,	
  daily	
  basis.	
  	
  
•  Collect	
  stories	
  from	
  everyone	
  you	
  meet.	
  
•  Read.	
  Read.	
  Read.	
  Read.	
  And	
  Read	
  some	
  more.	
  	
  
Survival Guide # 2: Write a CATCHY first
paragraph
I	
  heard	
  my	
  neighbor	
  through	
  the	
  wall.	
  
	
  
The	
  neighbor	
  behind	
  us	
  pracDced	
  scream	
  therapy	
  in	
  his	
  shower	
  
almost	
  every	
  day.	
  
	
  
The	
  first	
  Dme	
  I	
  heard	
  him,	
  I	
  stood	
  in	
  the	
  bathroom	
  listening	
  at	
  our	
  
shared	
  wall	
  for	
  ten	
  minutes,	
  debaDng	
  the	
  wisdom	
  of	
  calling	
  the	
  
police.	
  It	
  was	
  very	
  different	
  from	
  living	
  in	
  the	
  duplex	
  over	
  middle-­‐
aged	
  Mr.	
  and	
  Mrs.	
  Brown	
  and	
  their	
  two	
  young	
  sons	
  in	
  Duluth.	
  
Survival Guide # 3: Developing Characters
Survival Guide # 3: Developing Characters
• Ac7on.	
  	
  
• Speech.	
  	
  
• Thought.	
  
• Appearance.	
  	
  
	
  	
  
Survival Guide # 3: Developing Characters
Her	
  name	
  is	
  Alys,	
  short	
  for	
  Alys	
  Zyril	
  Perez.	
  She	
  is	
  17	
  years	
  
old.	
  She	
  is	
  a	
  fair-­‐skinned	
  Filipina	
  with	
  brown	
  eyes,	
  long,	
  
straight	
  black	
  hair,	
  and	
  is	
  5	
  feet	
  5	
  inches	
  tall.	
  Contrary	
  to	
  the	
  
expectaDons	
  of	
  the	
  people	
  around	
  her,	
  she	
  actually	
  doesn’t	
  
like	
  studying.	
  She	
  loves	
  to	
  bake	
  and	
  has	
  the	
  knack	
  to	
  kid	
  
around	
  most	
  of	
  the	
  Dme.	
  She	
  is	
  a	
  4th	
  year	
  high	
  school	
  student	
  
whose	
  graduaDon	
  is	
  sDll	
  at	
  stake.	
  She	
  lives	
  with	
  her	
  parents	
  
and	
  her	
  younger	
  brother.	
  She	
  has	
  two	
  best	
  friends:	
  Aya	
  and	
  
Sheen.	
  She	
  loves	
  strawberries.	
  She	
  loves	
  anything	
  that	
  is	
  
pink.	
  And	
  she	
  is	
  secretly	
  in	
  love	
  her	
  best	
  friend.	
  
Survival Guide # 4: Point of View
First?	
  
	
  
Second?	
  
	
  
Third?	
  
Survival Guide # 4: Point of View
First?	
  
	
  
Second?	
  
	
  
Third?	
  
Survival Guide # 5: Meaningful Dialogues
“What?”	
  I	
  asked.	
  “I	
  want	
  to	
  break	
  up	
  with	
  
you,”	
  Drake	
  said.	
  “But	
  why?”	
  The	
  tears	
  
were	
  threatening	
  to	
  fall	
  and	
  my	
  lips	
  began	
  
to	
  shiver.	
  I	
  couldn’t	
  understand.	
  What’s	
  
happening?	
  Why	
  was	
  this	
  happening?	
  	
  
Survival Guide # 5: Meaningful Dialogues
Alys	
  was	
  nervous.	
  
	
  
“I	
  don’t	
  think	
  I	
  can	
  do	
  this,”	
  she	
  said	
  as	
  she	
  
bit	
  on	
  her	
  lower	
  lip.	
  Her	
  heart	
  was	
  
pounding	
  wildly	
  inside	
  her	
  chest.	
  	
  
	
  
She	
  didn’t	
  meet	
  his	
  eyes.	
  She	
  lowered	
  her	
  
gaze	
  and	
  kept	
  her	
  mum.	
  	
  
Survival Guide # 6: Effective Settings
VIVID	
  
Survival Guide # 6: Effective Settings
The	
  color	
  of	
  the	
  walls	
  was	
  making	
  Alys	
  dizzy.	
  The	
  
room	
  felt	
  small.	
  Everything	
  around	
  her	
  seemed	
  
normal	
  but	
  the	
  truth	
  was	
  it	
  wasn’t.	
  The	
  sun	
  was	
  
hiding;	
  the	
  flowers	
  were	
  dead;	
  no	
  one	
  was	
  
around.	
  She	
  could	
  not	
  contain	
  herself.	
  She	
  went	
  
outside	
  but	
  the	
  gloomy	
  weather	
  was	
  not	
  of	
  any	
  
help.	
  It	
  felt	
  so	
  wrong.	
  Everything	
  at	
  that	
  moment	
  
felt	
  so	
  wrong.	
  	
  
Survival Guide # 6: Set-up the Plot
Explosion	
  or	
  “Hook.”	
  
Conflict	
  
Exposi7on.	
  
Complica7on.	
  	
  
Transi7on.	
  	
  
Flashback.	
  	
  
Climax.	
  
Falling	
  Ac7on.	
  	
  
Resolu7on.	
  
Survival Guide # 7: Writing the actual scene
Survival Guide # 7: Grammar
Don’t	
  seTle.	
  Always	
  strive	
  to	
  perfect	
  your	
  
grammar.	
  If	
  not	
  perfect,	
  at	
  least	
  try	
  to	
  
fake	
  it.	
  	
  
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  • 2. Writing Survival Kit: Starter Pack Ariesa Domingo
  • 3.
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  • 9.
  • 10. Survival Guide # 1: Get Started: Emergency Tips •  What  does  your  protagonist  want?   •  What  morally  significant  ac7ons  has  your  protagonist  taken   towards  that  goal?   •  What  unexpected  consequences  ramp  up  the  emo7onal  energy   of  the  story?   •  What  details  from  the  se4ng,  dialog,  and  tone  help  you  tell  the   story?   •  What  morally  significant  choice  does  your  protagonist  make  at   the  climax  of  the  story?  
  • 12. Tips… •  Keep  a  notebook.     •  Write  on  a  regular,  daily  basis.     •  Collect  stories  from  everyone  you  meet.   •  Read.  Read.  Read.  Read.  And  Read  some  more.    
  • 13. Survival Guide # 2: Write a CATCHY first paragraph I  heard  my  neighbor  through  the  wall.     The  neighbor  behind  us  pracDced  scream  therapy  in  his  shower   almost  every  day.     The  first  Dme  I  heard  him,  I  stood  in  the  bathroom  listening  at  our   shared  wall  for  ten  minutes,  debaDng  the  wisdom  of  calling  the   police.  It  was  very  different  from  living  in  the  duplex  over  middle-­‐ aged  Mr.  and  Mrs.  Brown  and  their  two  young  sons  in  Duluth.  
  • 14. Survival Guide # 3: Developing Characters
  • 15. Survival Guide # 3: Developing Characters • Ac7on.     • Speech.     • Thought.   • Appearance.        
  • 16. Survival Guide # 3: Developing Characters Her  name  is  Alys,  short  for  Alys  Zyril  Perez.  She  is  17  years   old.  She  is  a  fair-­‐skinned  Filipina  with  brown  eyes,  long,   straight  black  hair,  and  is  5  feet  5  inches  tall.  Contrary  to  the   expectaDons  of  the  people  around  her,  she  actually  doesn’t   like  studying.  She  loves  to  bake  and  has  the  knack  to  kid   around  most  of  the  Dme.  She  is  a  4th  year  high  school  student   whose  graduaDon  is  sDll  at  stake.  She  lives  with  her  parents   and  her  younger  brother.  She  has  two  best  friends:  Aya  and   Sheen.  She  loves  strawberries.  She  loves  anything  that  is   pink.  And  she  is  secretly  in  love  her  best  friend.  
  • 17. Survival Guide # 4: Point of View First?     Second?     Third?  
  • 18. Survival Guide # 4: Point of View First?     Second?     Third?  
  • 19. Survival Guide # 5: Meaningful Dialogues “What?”  I  asked.  “I  want  to  break  up  with   you,”  Drake  said.  “But  why?”  The  tears   were  threatening  to  fall  and  my  lips  began   to  shiver.  I  couldn’t  understand.  What’s   happening?  Why  was  this  happening?    
  • 20. Survival Guide # 5: Meaningful Dialogues Alys  was  nervous.     “I  don’t  think  I  can  do  this,”  she  said  as  she   bit  on  her  lower  lip.  Her  heart  was   pounding  wildly  inside  her  chest.       She  didn’t  meet  his  eyes.  She  lowered  her   gaze  and  kept  her  mum.    
  • 21. Survival Guide # 6: Effective Settings VIVID  
  • 22. Survival Guide # 6: Effective Settings The  color  of  the  walls  was  making  Alys  dizzy.  The   room  felt  small.  Everything  around  her  seemed   normal  but  the  truth  was  it  wasn’t.  The  sun  was   hiding;  the  flowers  were  dead;  no  one  was   around.  She  could  not  contain  herself.  She  went   outside  but  the  gloomy  weather  was  not  of  any   help.  It  felt  so  wrong.  Everything  at  that  moment   felt  so  wrong.    
  • 23. Survival Guide # 6: Set-up the Plot Explosion  or  “Hook.”   Conflict   Exposi7on.   Complica7on.     Transi7on.     Flashback.     Climax.   Falling  Ac7on.     Resolu7on.  
  • 24. Survival Guide # 7: Writing the actual scene
  • 25. Survival Guide # 7: Grammar Don’t  seTle.  Always  strive  to  perfect  your   grammar.  If  not  perfect,  at  least  try  to   fake  it.