9. What revision means to us revision as a writing practice: something we already do something we know how to do
10. What revision means to us revision as a thought practice: REVISION RE-VISION RE-SEEING
11. What revision means to us revision as a social practice: Do we need to/want to respond to the world? How do we respond? Do things need to change? How do we begin to make changes?
12. We have written: An analysis of an artifact A researched essay A personal narrative Our writing: Was composed with alphabetic text Was composed with standard, edited English Was composed in word processors Had peers/classmates and the instructor as its actual audience Was delivered as MS Word documents So far…