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Peer Revision Molly H. Easthampton, MA Maple School- 4 th  grade
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2) Structure “ Student’s that are divided into groups and are just asked to discuss their writing without specific guidelines, in the form of a worksheet or list of questions, will flounder.” (Master, Eileen). Gail Tompkins provides a set of steps students are to follow during a peer revision time to provide them with some structure: 1) writer reads, 2) listeners compliment, 3)writer asks questions, 4) listeners give suggestions, 5) repeat, 6)writers plan for revision.
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  • 5. 2) Structure “ Student’s that are divided into groups and are just asked to discuss their writing without specific guidelines, in the form of a worksheet or list of questions, will flounder.” (Master, Eileen). Gail Tompkins provides a set of steps students are to follow during a peer revision time to provide them with some structure: 1) writer reads, 2) listeners compliment, 3)writer asks questions, 4) listeners give suggestions, 5) repeat, 6)writers plan for revision.
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