1. Double Page Spread Development

3. Its well balanced with the big picture and the small pictures down the side balance by the writing in the top third.

4. The three columns aren’t perfectly lined up they need to be level top and bottom.

5. Quote on the picture page doesn’t stand out enough, the bold lines do make it more noticeable but it blends into the background, needs to jump forward.

6. The bottom photo booth image is the same as the one used on the contents page I might change it to a different one.

8. Using the same colours for the quote in the right hand corner of the image page has helped lift it from the image and can now more easily be seen.

9. The three columns no line up perfectly giving it a professional finish. Having the questions in bold also makes it look professional.

10. I changed the order of the photos to balance to out top: looking right middle: more central and bottom: looking left. Also by changing the direction of the drop shadow the strip of photos stand out from the white background making it more noticeable.