3. Uses:
• In Vnese: chi phí đám cưới: 60% đãi
tiệc, 30% lễ ăn hỏi, còn 10% cho các
phát sinh khác
•In English: the four are holding a
hefty market share of 70%. 20
domestic companies take of 20%
of the market while a mere 10%
goes to remaining firms
4. Errors:
* Repeating words:
- The four holds 70% market share,
20 big domestic firms hold 20%,
and the remaining holds 10%
* Repeating structure: there are,
there is,
5. Alternative:
• Use synonym: “hold” -> “have” or “take account
for”,…
• Use racket: Thailand (742 projects) and China
(801 projects),…
• Use various structures:
- the first, the second, ……………., the last, the
remaining, the rest
- respectively
- A takes the leading position with…. B
ranks 2nd at…., followed by C, accounting
for …. D is not far behind.