An unique perspective of how the ideal world would be in my perspective.

2. In my ideal world,
there will be peace...

3. ... And everyone will
be kings and queens.

4. In my world,
everyone puts their
problem aside to have
fun..

5. Also, there is no internet, mobile
phones or technology for peope to be
like they are today... Today people
don’t have time for each other, they
only have time for technology...

6. And this is my ideal
world... All those who
want to be free can
live here. Also, those
who want to be in a
different society and
live as a bird or live as
you like are welcome
to live here!

7. THE END
Author: André
Editorial Supervisor: Teacher: Gerson A. Moura
Illustrator: Jchanart
Publisher: www.storybird.com
Date: II Semester - Summer 2014
A project from ‘Cilc’s Writing Club’: “Café Literário”
CILC: Centro Interescolar de Línguas de Ceilândia

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