1. A2Photography Assessment:Unit 3 Coursework Portfolio
AO2
AO3
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UNIT 3
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GRADE:
PRESENT
AO1
TOTAL:
RECORD
UNITS:
UNIT 3
TEACHER(S):Mr Holden/Ms Carey
COMMENTS:
Issey there is some interesting work here the projection work towards the end of the project
are particularly interesting. However as the project moves on I feel you are losing your
meaning a little and are not as interesting. The bold colour work of Bill Armstrong gives the
photographs a focal point and I feel your work needs to have this. As the project
progresses you must make sure to write exactly where you are going and why at the
moment there are lots of visuals but not enough written explanations. You must make sure
that all artists you look at have at least one image analysed in detail and then connected to
your own visual practise.
Tasks
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Personal Project
EXPERIMENT
CANDIDATE #
DEVELOP
STUDENT:Issey Tulip-Parkin
Contact sheets need to be larger to enable viewer to see you r visual thought processes
Document all processes
More focus on faces portraits (Possible path forward)
Blur person not background (Possible path forward)
Link work back to Armstrong using colour and projection of images on the figure
You must write up everything and explain what you are doing contextually and practically
Analyses all artists looked at in full detail
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C-
This is a working at grade at present you don’t not have a clearly defined final piece so this is
reflected in your mark