1. 2nd DRAFT “THE UNKNOWN”
By Hannah Butters
Time Location Video Audio
N/A Opening titles, Non-diegetic eerie
3 including production string music.
secs and actors credits (on
a black background).
The North A view of a classroom Same music continues.
2 Block through the window in
secs corridor, the North Block
The Beacon corridor. Credits
School continue to show; they
are layered on top of
the visual.
A desolate A dusty desk and Same music continues.
2 classroom, tucked in chair. A
secs The Beacon solitary pen sits
School still on top the
wooden desk. The room
is in darkness apart
from the natural
lighting that streaks
in through the window,
illuminating the desk
and chair.
A desolate An old pile of books. Same music continues.
2 classroom, Credits continue to be
secs The Beacon displayed
School
3 A desolate A door slams. Creaking and banging
secs classroom, of the slamming door.
The Beacon Eerie music abruptly
School stops.
3 N/A The Main Title – THE Ghost radar SFX
secs UNKNOWN
2 Outside GRACE’S eyes. GRACE: Is it on? Are
secs the you recording?
entrance
to The SOPHIE: Oops! Hang
Beacon on! It’s zoomed right
2 School SOPHIE zooms out on into your face. Let
secs the camera so GRACE me just zoom out…
and ERIN are fully in
10 shot. GRACE: Oh cheers
secs Sophie!
SOPHIE: Well, we can
edit that bit out,
2. 2nd DRAFT “THE UNKNOWN”
By Hannah Butters
don’t worry!
GRACE: Ready?
SOPHIE: Yep, ok when
you’re ready…
8 GRACE looks directly GRACE: Ok, so the
secs into the camera. ERIN time is 10.18 pm and
stands beside her. we are just about to
break into the school
to spend a night in
the supposedly
haunted east wing!
ERIN shows the camera ERIN: So yeah, we got
her rucksack. the stuff; Torch,
sleeping bag, that
sort of thing!
SOPHIE: So should we
head in?
ERIN and GRACE start GRACE: The gates
6 walking towards the should be just round
secs building, SOPHIE the back here…
follows with the
camera.
The girls reach the ERIN: Ok, so you
back gates. expect us to climb
that?
5 GRACE attempts to lift GRACE: Yeah, come
secs ERIN onto the gate, here and I’ll give
but is clearly you a boost.
struggling.
SOPHIE can you help
please?
SOPHIE: I have a
camera in my hand!
GRACE: Yeah well,
switch it off for the
minute and give me a
hand.
The camera switches
off.
