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JAMIE THORN & THE MYSTERY PACIFIC
   – FOR KING AND COUNTRY LYRICS
                           Red - Stock
                           Blue - Band
                        Green – Narrative
                              Misc
    TIME               LYRICS                                   ON SCREEN
  MARKS
INTRO               Instrumental                               BLACKSCREEN
0:10                                                             FADE IN
10 seconds                                         These were our sons who died for our
                                                      lands engraved in stone plays.
VERSE #1                                                  The camera begins from the left
              i think upon those friends of               moving to right with a PANNING
0:11-0:55
40 seconds    mine and memories they say                  shot of the whole band
                                                          performing at a MID LEVEL
              how brave our step behind the               angle.
              band upon a summer's day                    LOW ANGLE behind the front
                                                          man then cutaway to
              oh i did not go alone my friends i          MEDIUM CLOSE UP of front
                                                          man’s face, singing.
              did not go alone
              my friends and i wave goodbye               Aged footage plays of a ship
                                                          leaving the harbor with the
              as our ship left England home               soldiers being waved goodbye by
                                                          the people left behind on land.
              oh we joked and laughed upon
                                                          A mother clutching her children
              the words, what would our                   all-crying together.
              mothers say                                 Girl in the green dress crying,
              unwed again in sweethearts                  wiping her eyes with a
                                                          handkerchief as soldiers
              arms by Christmas we were dead


Build up to                                        As the CHORUS builds:
chorus
0:56/7-1.16                                        LOW LEVEL of foot tapping bass drum
20 seconds                                         LONG SHOT from the band from behind
                                                   LEFT SIDE PROFILE of the band playing
                                                   LONG SHOT of the band from the front
CHORUS                                             MEDIUM LONG SHOT of the bass
1:17-1.46                                          guitarist playing
27 seconds                                         MID LEVEL CLOSE UP shot of fingers
                                                   strumming a guitar then CUTAWAY to
                                                   ______________________________

                                                   (CHORUS)

                                                          a MEDIUM LONG SHOT of front
man singing first line,
                                                  MEDIUM LONG SHOT of entire
                                                  band directly from the front,
                                                  MID LEVEL CLOSE UP of hand
              they say i fight, for king and      playing guitar, cutaway to
              country                             similar shots of each instrument
                                                  being played by each band
              they say it's my, duty to which i   member
                                                  CUT to CLOSE UP of face singing,
              must uphold                         CUT to EXTREME CLOSE UP of
              when she's in need, when she's      mouth singing then ZOOM OUT
                                                  as chorus ends on ‘oh’
              in danger
              your country calls out to you,
              you are a saviour
              oh

1:47 – 1:57                                       LONG SHOT Cut to the man
              our laughter draws down the line    standing in front of his mirror
10 seconds
VERSE #2      the whisper song, the long          looking nervous, CLOSE UP of
1:57 – 2.20                                       him doing buttons and suiting up
              drawn whine                         in his military uniform
23 seconds
              there were no cheering crowds
                                                  HIGH ANGLE see him leaving
              the giggling eyes                   house from window,
              there was no marching band          LOW LEVEL stepping onto the
              cackling guns against boys so       street and crushing a flower
                                                  pushing up from the crack in the
              fine                                concrete, growing where it’s not
                                                  supposed to.
              no summer bloom marked
              friends of mine                     Autumn leaves pass him on the
                                                  pavement below, being swept
              over the top the sergeant cries     away by the wind.
              and into no man’s land
                                                  Cut to Afghanistan footage, a
                                                  military airplane travels the sky.
                                                  A lone soldier aims his gun and
                                                  fires, then cut to men crawling
                                                  over the trenches, sand flying
                                                  into the air everywhere.


2:21 – 2:24                                       HIGH ANGLE of the man
              oh my dear friends amidst the
    music                                         holding an old school
VERSE #3      trench i see you all                graduation photo, CLOSE UP
2.25 – 2:52                                       of his face MATCHED cut to
              my pale schoolyard chums away
31 seconds                                        POV shot down at the photo,
              lost country’s call                 with his thumb tracing the
names and cut to names-
              and in this brief moment of
              silence thoughts of hope make        Lines from the stone
                                                   inscriptions in the memorial
              me cower
                                                   (Stockwell) appear on screen,
              as i set foot on England's fields    PANNING from left to right.
                                                   Then names come scrolling
              and guns in each arm
                                                   down one after the other with
                                                   the camera TILTing down.

                                                   MEDIUM LONG SHOT in the
                                                   centre of the front , showing
                                                   band playing.

                                                   Cutaway to MEDIUM CLOSE
                                                   UP of front man singing last
                                                   line.




CHORUS 2                                           There’s a LOUD NOISE; JUMP
              did we fight, for king and
2:53 – 3:18                                        cut as the man jumps
25 seconds    country                              suddenly, a wild look in his
                                                   eyes. LOW ANGLE from the
              no, said i, we fought for thoughts
                                                   middle showing the band play
              of returning home
              and men who need me, for all         Camera focus on side profile,
                                                   MEDIUM LONG SHOT from
              our loved ones                       the nose down so we can see
              welcome home, a hero, for all i      he’s breathing heavy. Band
                                                   member CLOSE UP hand
              have done                            playing instrument
                                                   MEDIUM LONG SHOT side
                                                   profile the front man singing –

                                                   TILT camera up: it was an
                                                   innocuous noise but it’s war in
                                                   his ears all over again CUT-
                                                   CUT direct front shot of the
                                                   entire band playing-

                                                   360 degree shot of man in the
                                                   middle of an empty-ish room,
                                                   rocking backward and
                                                   forwards. Wife comes in and
                                                   puts her arms round him,
                                                   quick cuts between man alone
and wife comforting him as
                                                           the camera circles round.

3:19 – 3:42                                         Flicker back and forth between quick
               they say x 6, oh they say x2
they say                                            clips of
23 seconds     did they die, for king and               a) Bush speaking
VERSE #4                                                b) Band playing
               country?
3:43 - 4:05                                             c) Churchill speaking
46 seconds     was it right, that they should die       d) Band playing
                                                        e) Bush
               so far from home
                                                        f) Band
               they'll never greet you, in              g) Churchill
                                                        h) Band
               adoration or shake your hand
                                                        i) Protests
               down familiar streets, in glory      ________
               green and pleasant land
                                                    The room is dark, MEDIUM LONG
                                                    SHOT he’s in bed at home and he’s
                                                    having night terrors again.
                                                    CUTAWAY shot of him
VERSE #5                                            As the song slows, a clock face
               how wrong we were to think it
4:06 – 4:36                                         dominates the screen coming into
38 seconds     fun                                  focus and the second hand is slowly
4.37 – 4: 44                                        ticking to 11 am – referencing
               great foreign fields against the x
End music                                           Remembrance Day when we have a
7 seconds      forced to dig the darkening mire     minute of silence. See him close his
                                                    eyes in remembrance of what he
               pray for us all in our plight
                                                    knows and feels.
               i close my eyes, i see my friends
                                                    The song comes to an end. LONG
               along the line many fine young
                                                    SHOT and simply hold the shot: the
               men                                  band all look down at the ground in
                                                    silence, lowering their instruments
               lying still in x x grace
                                                    with solemn faces and everything lies
               their lifeless eyes, their mouths    still.
               agape
                                                                 FADE OUT
               i feel alone at the wars end                    BLACKSCREEN
               i wish i died among my friends

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  • 1. JAMIE THORN & THE MYSTERY PACIFIC – FOR KING AND COUNTRY LYRICS Red - Stock Blue - Band Green – Narrative Misc TIME LYRICS ON SCREEN MARKS INTRO Instrumental BLACKSCREEN 0:10 FADE IN 10 seconds These were our sons who died for our lands engraved in stone plays. VERSE #1 The camera begins from the left i think upon those friends of moving to right with a PANNING 0:11-0:55 40 seconds mine and memories they say shot of the whole band performing at a MID LEVEL how brave our step behind the angle. band upon a summer's day LOW ANGLE behind the front man then cutaway to oh i did not go alone my friends i MEDIUM CLOSE UP of front man’s face, singing. did not go alone my friends and i wave goodbye Aged footage plays of a ship leaving the harbor with the as our ship left England home soldiers being waved goodbye by the people left behind on land. oh we joked and laughed upon A mother clutching her children the words, what would our all-crying together. mothers say Girl in the green dress crying, unwed again in sweethearts wiping her eyes with a handkerchief as soldiers arms by Christmas we were dead Build up to As the CHORUS builds: chorus 0:56/7-1.16 LOW LEVEL of foot tapping bass drum 20 seconds LONG SHOT from the band from behind LEFT SIDE PROFILE of the band playing LONG SHOT of the band from the front CHORUS MEDIUM LONG SHOT of the bass 1:17-1.46 guitarist playing 27 seconds MID LEVEL CLOSE UP shot of fingers strumming a guitar then CUTAWAY to ______________________________ (CHORUS) a MEDIUM LONG SHOT of front
  • 2. man singing first line, MEDIUM LONG SHOT of entire band directly from the front, MID LEVEL CLOSE UP of hand they say i fight, for king and playing guitar, cutaway to country similar shots of each instrument being played by each band they say it's my, duty to which i member CUT to CLOSE UP of face singing, must uphold CUT to EXTREME CLOSE UP of when she's in need, when she's mouth singing then ZOOM OUT as chorus ends on ‘oh’ in danger your country calls out to you, you are a saviour oh 1:47 – 1:57 LONG SHOT Cut to the man our laughter draws down the line standing in front of his mirror 10 seconds VERSE #2 the whisper song, the long looking nervous, CLOSE UP of 1:57 – 2.20 him doing buttons and suiting up drawn whine in his military uniform 23 seconds there were no cheering crowds HIGH ANGLE see him leaving the giggling eyes house from window, there was no marching band LOW LEVEL stepping onto the cackling guns against boys so street and crushing a flower pushing up from the crack in the fine concrete, growing where it’s not supposed to. no summer bloom marked friends of mine Autumn leaves pass him on the pavement below, being swept over the top the sergeant cries away by the wind. and into no man’s land Cut to Afghanistan footage, a military airplane travels the sky. A lone soldier aims his gun and fires, then cut to men crawling over the trenches, sand flying into the air everywhere. 2:21 – 2:24 HIGH ANGLE of the man oh my dear friends amidst the music holding an old school VERSE #3 trench i see you all graduation photo, CLOSE UP 2.25 – 2:52 of his face MATCHED cut to my pale schoolyard chums away 31 seconds POV shot down at the photo, lost country’s call with his thumb tracing the
  • 3. names and cut to names- and in this brief moment of silence thoughts of hope make Lines from the stone inscriptions in the memorial me cower (Stockwell) appear on screen, as i set foot on England's fields PANNING from left to right. Then names come scrolling and guns in each arm down one after the other with the camera TILTing down. MEDIUM LONG SHOT in the centre of the front , showing band playing. Cutaway to MEDIUM CLOSE UP of front man singing last line. CHORUS 2 There’s a LOUD NOISE; JUMP did we fight, for king and 2:53 – 3:18 cut as the man jumps 25 seconds country suddenly, a wild look in his eyes. LOW ANGLE from the no, said i, we fought for thoughts middle showing the band play of returning home and men who need me, for all Camera focus on side profile, MEDIUM LONG SHOT from our loved ones the nose down so we can see welcome home, a hero, for all i he’s breathing heavy. Band member CLOSE UP hand have done playing instrument MEDIUM LONG SHOT side profile the front man singing – TILT camera up: it was an innocuous noise but it’s war in his ears all over again CUT- CUT direct front shot of the entire band playing- 360 degree shot of man in the middle of an empty-ish room, rocking backward and forwards. Wife comes in and puts her arms round him, quick cuts between man alone
  • 4. and wife comforting him as the camera circles round. 3:19 – 3:42 Flicker back and forth between quick they say x 6, oh they say x2 they say clips of 23 seconds did they die, for king and a) Bush speaking VERSE #4 b) Band playing country? 3:43 - 4:05 c) Churchill speaking 46 seconds was it right, that they should die d) Band playing e) Bush so far from home f) Band they'll never greet you, in g) Churchill h) Band adoration or shake your hand i) Protests down familiar streets, in glory ________ green and pleasant land The room is dark, MEDIUM LONG SHOT he’s in bed at home and he’s having night terrors again. CUTAWAY shot of him VERSE #5 As the song slows, a clock face how wrong we were to think it 4:06 – 4:36 dominates the screen coming into 38 seconds fun focus and the second hand is slowly 4.37 – 4: 44 ticking to 11 am – referencing great foreign fields against the x End music Remembrance Day when we have a 7 seconds forced to dig the darkening mire minute of silence. See him close his eyes in remembrance of what he pray for us all in our plight knows and feels. i close my eyes, i see my friends The song comes to an end. LONG along the line many fine young SHOT and simply hold the shot: the men band all look down at the ground in silence, lowering their instruments lying still in x x grace with solemn faces and everything lies their lifeless eyes, their mouths still. agape FADE OUT i feel alone at the wars end BLACKSCREEN i wish i died among my friends