1. The Revolt of 'Mother'
By Mary E. Wilkins Freeman (1852-1930)
A Study Guide
2. Type of Work and Year of Publication
.......“The Revolt of 'Mother,' ” by Mary E. Wilkins Freeman, is a short story focusing on a
woman who takes a stand against an authoritarian husband. Because Freeman's stories are
primarily about New Englanders and the way they live, they are considered part of the local-
color movement in American literature. A typical local-color writer focused on a particular
region, its customs and traditions, its dialect, and so on. Harper's Bazaar published “The Revolt
of 'Mother'” in its issue of September 1890. A year later, the New York firm of Harper and
Brothers published the story in A New England Nun and Other Stories, a collection of Freeman's
works.
SETTING
.......The action takes place on a farm in rural New England in the spring and summer of a year in
the late nineteenth century.
CHARACTERS
Sarah Penn: Patient, hard-working farm wife and mother. She respects her husband and
apparently loves him. However, because he spends his profits as a farmer on new buildings and
new animals to the neglect of the small and poorly furnished home in which the Penn family
lives, Sarah decides one day to rebel against his rule in order to provide the family a new home.
Adoniram Penn: Sarah's husband. He ignores the needs of his family in favor of the needs of his
farm. When his wife attempts to persuade him to think more about improving their living
conditions and less about improving the farm, he obstinately refuses even to discuss the subject.
Nanny: Daughter of Mr. and Mrs. Penn.
Samuel: Son of Mr. and Mrs. Penn.
Mr. Hersey: Minister.
Hiram: Mrs. Penn's brother, who lives in Vermont.
Rufus: Farm helper.
Young Hired Hand: Farm helper.
George Eastman: Fiancé of Nanny.
Laborers: Three men digging a cellar for a new barn.
Villagers
4. .......She tells her that her fiancé, George Eastman, is no different from other men. Nanny is to
marry him in the fall. Sarah then tells her daughter she shouldn't be too critical of her father. He
has provided well enough for them, and the roof doesn't leak. Moreover, he hasn't made Nanny
go out to work for a living like other girls.
.......After finishing with the dishes, Sarah sets to making mince pies, a favorite of her husband.
She is is a good housekeeper, with nary a speck of dust to be found anywhere. Nanny begins
sewing on embroidery and linen. As Sarah works on the pies, she looks up now and then at the
men digging the cellar at the site where Adoniram promised forty years before that a new house
would rise.
.......At noon, the family sits down to dinner, Adoniram asks God's blessing, and they eat without
much talk. Afterward, Sammy heads back to school before Adoniram has a chance to tell him to
help unload wood from the wagon.
.......“I don't see why you let him go for, mother,” he says.
.......When Nanny goes out to buy more thread and embroidery, Sarah asks her husband why he is
building a new barn.
......."I ain't got nothin' to say about it,” he replies.
.......She repeats the question but gets the same answer. When she asks whether he is going to
buy more cows, he says nothing. Sarah then stands before him and declares she is going to “talk
plain” to him. Then she points out the condition of the room they are in: no rug, deteriorating
wallpaper. Yet she has to work in it, and Nanny has to entertain her friends in it. Neighbors have
better but don't have half the means he has. She opens the bedroom door and reveals the small
room that she has had to sleep in for forty years. She bore all her children there—the two that are
alive and the two that are dead. Sarah opens the pantry door and recites further complaints. She
then turns her attention to the children's rooms. Both are unfinished. Nanny's room, she says,
“ain't so good as a horse's stall.”
.......Sarah then reminds her husband of his promise forty years before that he would build them a
new house within a year. But all he did was build sheds, cow houses, and one new barn.
.......“I ain't got nothin' to say,” he says.
.......His wife continues, saying she never complained until now. After Nanny is married, she
says, Nanny will have to live somewhere else unless he builds a house. But Nanny is a delicate
creature. “She'll be all worn out inside a year.”
.......Adoniram gets up, saying he has to finish unloading the wood and then get the gravel. Sarah
asks him whether he will think over what she said.
.......“I ain't got nothin' to say.”
5. .......Sarah goes to the bedroom for a while. After she comes out, her eyes are red. She rolls out a
piece of cloth and begins making shirts for her husband. When Nanny returns with her
embroidery, she notices that her mother isn't herself and asks what's wrong. Sarah says,
“Nothin'.” Adoniram, meanwhile, drives out in the two-wheeled cart.
.......Work on the new barn progresses rapidly. It is a fine building, and some people come by on
Sundays to look at it.
.......On a morning in the third week of July, it is finished. Just before Adoniram is ready to move
the cows in, he receives a letter from Sarah's brother Hiram, who lives in Vermont. Hiram says if
Adoniram comes up immediately, he can buy the kind of horse he has been wanting. Sarah, who
is now making pies, goes pale. Her heart begins to beat faster.
.......“I hate to go off jest now, right in the midst of hayin'," he says, "but the ten-acre lot's cut, an'
I guess Rufus an' the others can git along without me three or four days. I can't get a horse round
here to suit me, nohow, an' I've got to have another for all that wood-haulin' in the fall. I told
Hiram to watch out, an' if he got wind of a good horse to let me know. I guess I'd better go.”
.......Sarah lays out his Sunday suit, cravat, collar, and clean clothes, then made his lunch. In a
short while, he is off. It will be Saturday, four days off, before he returns. Sarah resumes making
pies. Nanny is sewing. Sarah mutters something about “opportunity,” and the narrator says she
has made up her mind on a certain course of action.
.......By eleven 11 a.m., Sammy and other men pull up at the new barn with a load of hay. But
Sarah runs out and tells them to put it in the old barn. A young man whom Adoniram hires
periodically replies that her husband told them to put the hay in the new barn. Sarah prevails,
however, and the men pull over to the old barn.
.......While Nanny and Sammy eat dinner, their mother begins bringing out dishes from the pantry
and loading them in a clothes basket. They realize something unusual is going on. Mrs. Penn
then tells Nanny to go upstairs and pack her things and Sammy to help her take the bed apart in
her bedroom.
.......Over the next few hours, they move the dishes, the bed, Nanny's things, and just about
everything else in the house into the new barn. By five that evening, they finish. The stalls in the
barn are just right for bedrooms, and the harness room—with its chimney and shelves—is
perfect for a kitchen. There is plenty of space for a parlor, too, and the upper level of the building
is just as big as the lower one. And there are windows.
.......By six o'clock, Sarah has a fire going in the stove in the harness room and is ready to serve
tea. The young hired hand milks the cows and brings foaming pails into the new barn. Afterward,
he spreads word in the village about what is happening, and people take time out from their daily
6. routines to discuss Sarah Penn's move. They conclude that she must be a madwoman or a
“rebellious spirit.”
.......The Rev. Mr. Hersey visits her on Friday. Anticipating the purpose of his visit, Sarah tells
the minister it will do him no good to try to reverse her course. What she has done is right, she
says. He talks with her, but she remains firm in her resolve. When he leaves, he wonders what
will happen when Adoniram returns.
.......Four cows are delivered. Sarah orders three of them to be put in the old barn and the fourth
in the old house, which now serves as a shed.
.......On Saturday evening, shortly before the expected arrival of Adoniram, several men gather
on the road near the new barn, and the hired man sticks around after completing the milking.
Meanwhile, Sarah has cooked one of her husband's favorite meals: baked beans, brown bread,
and custard pie. She conducts herself with confidence, and the children are pleasantly excited.
.......When Adoniram arrives with the new horse, he first goes to the house. It is locked. He then
goes into the shed and comes back out with a dazed look on his face. Finally, he takes the horse
over to the new barn and opens the doors. Nanny, frightened, stands behind her mother in the
harness room. Sammy moves in front of both of them and says, “We've come her to live, father.”
Adoniram goes into the harness room and says, ““What on airth does this mean, mother?” Sarah
replies,
[W]e've come here to live, an' we're goin' to live here. We've got jest as good a right here as
new horses an' cows. The house wa'n't fit for us to live in any longer, an' I made up my mind I
wa'n't goin' to stay there. I've done my duty by you forty year, an' I'm goin' to do it now; but I'm
goin' to live here. You've got to put in some windows and partitions; an' you'll have to buy some
furniture.”
.......Sammy takes the new horse to the old barn. While Adoniram eats, he stops now and then to
stare at his wife. Afterward, he goes out and sits on a step at the side door of the barn, which
Sarah intends to be the front door of the house. After finishing the dishes, Sarah goes out to him
and touches him on a shoulder. He is weeping.
.......“I'll—put up the—partitions, an'—everything you—want, mother,” he says, then adds, “I
hadn't no idee you was so set on't as all this comes to.”.
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7. THEMES
Rebellion
.......After enduring her husband's domineering management of the household and farm for forty
years, Sarah Penn rebels. When he returns with his horse, she stuns him with the action she took
and with her resolve to stand fast, and he readily accedes to her wishes.
Self-Assertion
.......In achieving her goal, Sarah's main tactic is an attitude of quiet but firm self-assertion.
Confidant that she is in the right—and it is clear that she is—she acts decisively and succeeds.
Defying Tradition
.......In the late nineteenth century, men ruled the home. A woman was expected to cook, keep
house, take care of the children, and heed her husband's wishes. When Sarah rebels against her
husband, she defies this tradition, attracting the attention of her neighbors. They think she is
“insane” or possessed of a “lawless and rebellious spirit.”
Repression of Women in a Male-Dominated Society
.......Society in the late nineteenth century expected women to keep house, cook, bear and rear
children–but little more. Despite efforts of women’s-rights activists such as Lucretia Mott,
Elizabeth Cady Stanton, and Susan B. Anthony, women still had not received the right to vote in
national elections by the century’s end. Moreover, employers generally discriminated against
women by hiring them for menial jobs only and paying them less than men for the same work.
Sarah sums up the plight of women when she says,
“You ain't found out yet we're women-folks, Nanny Penn,” said she. “You ain't seen enough
of men-folks yet to. One of these days you'll find it out, an' then you'll know that we know only
what men-folks think we do, so far as any use of it goes, an' how we'd ought to reckon men-folks
in with Providence, an' not complain of what they do any more than we do of the weather.”
Climax
.......The climax of a literary work can be defined as (1) the turning point at which the conflict
begins to resolve itself for better or worse, or as (2) the final and most exciting event in a series
of events. According to the first definition, the climax of “The Revolt of 'Mother,'” occurs when
Sarah decides to move the family into the barn. According to the second definition, it occurs
when Adoniram returns from Vermont and discovers that his wife has moved the family into the
new barn.
8. Adoniram's Tears
.......At the end of the story, Adoniram sits weeping outside the barn. But he cries ambiguous
tears. On the one hand, they could represent long-overdue regret for the way he has treated Sarah
and for his postponement of her wish to have a new home. On the other hand, they could be a
manifestation of injured pride. After all, he had allowed his wife to trump him. In an age when
men ruled the home, Sarah had become queen for a day.
Figures of Speech
.......Following are examples of figures of speech in the story.
Alliteration
Repetition of a consonant sound
The spring air, full of the smell of growing grass and unseen blossoms, came in their faces.
He came gaping, dropping little blots of foam from the brimming pails. . . .
There were brown-bread and baked beans and a custard pie. . . .
She had on a clean calico. . . .
Onomatopoeia
Word that imitates a sound
The old man slapped the saddle upon the mare's back.
Presently Adoniram clattered out of the yard in his two-wheeled dump cart. . . .
Oxymoron
Combining contradictory words to reveal a truth or present an apt description
He looked at his wife, and his manner was defiantly apologetic.
Her tender, sweet face was full of a gentle distress.
Sarah Penn's face as she rolled her pies had that expression of meek vigor. . . .
9. Simile
Comparison of unlike things using like, as, or than
She looked as immovable to him as one of the rocks in his pasture-land, bound to the earth
with generations of blackberry vines.
A pretty girl's face, pink and delicate as a flower
Narrative Technique
.......Freeman's narration is objective and straightforward. Unlike many other writers of her era,
she wisely avoids undue sentimentality. She displays her restraint in this regard in the following
passage:
.......“Father, won't you think it over, an' have a house built there instead of a barn?”
.......“I ain't got nothin' to say.”
.......Adoniram shuffled out. Mrs. Penn went into her bedroom. When she came out, her eyes
were red. She had a roll of unbleached cotton cloth. She spread it out on the kitchen table, and
began cutting out some shirts for her husband.
Here, rather than presenting a crying scene, Freeman merely mentions that Sarah's eyes were red,
then continues with the story.
Glossary of Names, Allusions, and Vocabulary
Adoniram: Biblical name meaning "my Lord has exalted" or "lord of might." In the Old
Testament (1 Kings, 2 Samuel, 2 Chronicles), Adoniram (also referred to as Adoram and
Hadoram) is identified as the supervisor of forced labor for King David, King Solomon, and
King Rehoboam over a period of more than forty years. In Freeman's story, Adoniram is lord of
his household for forty years preceding his wife's revolt.
aureole: Halo.
bay mare: Reddish-brown mare. A mare is a female horse that is at least five years old.
betwixt: Between.
calico: Cotton cloth printed with a bright pattern.
cambric: Thin linen or cotton.
Catholic ascetic: Member of a religious order or the church laity who practices rigorous sacrifice
and self-denial to bring himself or herself closer to God.
10. cravat: Fabric band worn around the neck and tied in front; neckerchief, scarf, tie.
Heights of Abraham: Plains in southern Québec, Canada. On September 13, 1759, British forces
under Major-General James Wolfe (1727-1759) defeated French forces under Marquis de
Montcalm (1712-1759) in an important battle in the Seven Years War. Wolfe and Montcalm
both died in the fighting.
Jerseys: Small, pale brown dairy cattle that give creamy milk.
kitchen glass: Kitchen mirror.
maxim: Adage, proverb, wise saying.
ninepence: Nine pennies.
pease: peas.
Plymouth Rock: Boulder on the shore of southeastern Massachusetts. The pilgrims were said to
have landed there in 1620.
Sarah: In the Bible, the wife and step-sister of Abraham (Genesis 12:15; 20:12). In 1 Peter 3:6,
St. Peter praises her for submitting to the will of her husband. Her name is derived from the
Hebrew word for princess. In Freeman's story, Sarah submitted to the will of her husband for
forty years. However, this "princess" one day became a decision-making queen—at least for a
day.
stanchion: Upright beam or post used for support.
victuals (pronounced vittles): Food.
Webster: Daniel Webster (1782-1852), American lawyer, congressman, senator, and secretary of
state. He was a renowned orator. In "The Revolt of 'Mother,' " the narrator compares Sarah's skill
as a speaker to that of Webster.
Wolfe: See Heights of Abraham.
11. Study Questions and Essay Topics
1...Did the author blunder when she expected readers to believe that Sarah would wait forty years
before taking decisive action?
2...Sammy knew three months before his mother that his father was going to build a new barn.
Why didn't Adoniram tell Sarah about his plans?
3...Using information from the story and from reliable research sources, write a psychological
profile of Sarah.
4...Using information from the story and from reliable research sources, write a psychological
profile of Adoniram.
5. Write an informative essay about the limitations imposed on women by tradition, custom, and
law in nineteenth-century America.
6. If Sarah had consulted her brother, Hiram, about her plan to move into the new barn, would
he have supported her or sided with Adoniram?
7. Write an essay comparing and contrasting Sarah with Nora Helmer in Henrik Ibsen's A Doll's
House.
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