By Hannah Palmer

1. Slug line – INT – Day - Its set in an attic full of miscellaneous objects, cluttered and dis organised. Whilst
at the end of the attic an old rocking chair is sat on its own. Time: 5 sec
Shot description –Zoom in on rocking chair as it moves slightly.
Camera movement –Zoom on chair.
Figure movement – No figure movement
Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – No speech or
non diegetic. The sound of something falling from a shelf for the
diegetic.

2. Slug line – INT. Hallway in a regular family home, late afternoon day
time Time: 4 sec
Shot description – An object is thrown down some lowered stairs (forgotten
to be replaced back up) from the attic.
Camera movement – Tracks and zooms on object.
Figure movement – none
Editing instruction – cut
Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) - diegetic sound is the
radio playing red stars by birthday massacre quietly in the background, the
sound of her footsteps are over emphasised. No speech.

3. Slug line – INT. Hallway in a regular family home, late afternoon day time
Time:1.5 sec
Shot description – The ghost Grace who is pale and messy with tangled hair and dark
circles under her eyes is now stood halfway down the steps.
Camera movement – Long shot, no movement.
Figure movement – No movement from Grace.
Editing instruction –cuts
Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) - diegetic sound is the radio playing
red stars by birthday massacre quietly in the background, the sound of her footsteps are
over emphasised. No speech.

4. Slug line – INT. slightly messy Hallway of family home with drawers and cupboards, late
afternoon time. Time: 2 sec
Shot description – The character grace is now shown moving down the stairs
into the house from the attic.
Camera movement – Tracking shot
Figure movement – Walking down the steps, slowly while limping.
Editing instruction –Cut
Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – diegetic sound is the
radio playing red stars by birthday massacre quietly in the background, the
sound of her footsteps are over emphasised. No speech.

5. Slug line – INT. large bedroom with a double bed and most surfaces covered in books or other common items. A large
stereo is turned on in the corner which is shown by the lighting being turned on.
Time: 3 sec
Shot description – Close up on the radio which shows the bars moving
on the screen.
Camera movement – close up on radio
Figure movement – no figure movement
Editing instruction – cut
Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Diegetic sound is
the song red stars by birthday massacre playing from the radio.

6. Slug line – INT. large bedroom with a double bed and most surfaces covered in books or other common
items. A large stereo is turned on in the corner which is shown by the lighting being turned on.
Time: 4 sec
Shot description – Curled up on the edge of a bed is a black haired,
attractive young adult, Sammie. Wearing black jeans, t-shirt and hoodie.
Camera movement – long shot of Sammie
Figure movement – Sammie is asleep on the bed whilst Russell is asleep
on the floor with his back propped up against the bed
Editing instruction – Fades
Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) - diegetic sound is
Red stars by birthday massacre

7. Slug line – The bedroom is her parent’s and still shows signs of being lived in with half open books
on bed side tables and clothes still waiting to be put away. In the centre of the room is a large
double bed. Time: 2 sec
Shot description – The bedroom door is shown close up
Camera movement – close up
Figure movement – none
Editing instruction – cut
Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Slow
paced eerie childlike humming is heard over the radio playing

8. Slug line – The bedroom is her parent’s and still shows signs of being lived in with half open books on
bed side tables and clothes still waiting to be put away. In the centre of the room is a large double
bed. Time: 2 sec
Shot description – Close up of Grace’s Face (the ghost girl)
Camera movement – Close up
Figure movement – face of Grace is the only figure shown
Editing instruction – cut
Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) - Slow paced
eerie childlike humming is heard over the radio playing

9. Slug line – INT. The bedroom is her parent’s and still shows signs of being lived in
with half open books on bed side tables and clothes still waiting to be put away. In
the centre of the room is a large double bed. Time: 2 sec
Shot description – Grace is shown standing in the doorway with hand on the
door frame leaning slightly
Camera movement – long shot
Figure movement – Grace is shown leaning slightly on the doorframe
Editing instruction –cut
Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) - Slow paced eerie
childlike humming is heard over the radio playing

10. Slug line – INT. The bedroom is her parent’s and still shows signs of being lived in with half open books on
bed side tables and clothes still waiting to be put away. In the centre of the room is a large double bed. Time: 3 sec
Shot description – close up on hand on doorframe
Camera movement – close up on hand
Figure movement – slight tightening of hand on doorframe
Editing instruction –cut
Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) - (Diegetic,
non diegetic & speech) - Slow paced eerie childlike humming is
heard over the radio playing

11. Slug line – Slug line – INT. The bedroom is her parent’s and still shows signs of being lived in with half
open books on bed side tables and clothes still waiting to be put away. In the centre of the room is a
large double bed. Time: 1 sec
Shot description –close up on Grace’s eyes
Camera movement – close up
Editing instruction –cut
Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) -
(Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) - Slow paced eerie childlike
humming is heard over the radio playing

12. Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday
Time: 3 sec
Shot description – Radio shows on the screen it is no longer playing by the bars
no longer moving
Camera movement –Close up on the radio
Figure movement –
Editing instruction – Cut
Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Childlike humming is
heard still but the radio no longer plays.

13. Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday Time: 2sec
Shot description –
Grace begins to move towards Russell as he moves slightly in his sleep.
Camera movement – Long shot
Figure movement – Grace moving towards Russell whilst he sleeps.
Editing instruction – Cut
Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – The humming continues
but no other sound is heard.

14. Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday Time: 4 sec
Shot description – Russell is shown still sleeping through a close up
Camera movement – Close up
Figure movement – slight movement in sleep as if he might wake
up at any moment.
Editing instruction – Cut
Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Humming
continues

15. Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday Time: 4 sec
Shot description – Grace’s feet (ghost girl) are shown walking across the
carpet
Camera movement – Tracking shot of her feet
Figure movement –Grace’s Slow paced walking
Editing instruction –Cut
Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Humming is still
heard.

16. Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday Time: 5 sec
Shot description – Scissors are shown being lifted high in the air
Camera movement – Tracking shot of the scissors being raised in the air
Figure movement – Hands are shown lifting the scissors
Editing instruction – cut
Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Humming is still heard
through diegetic noise but non diegetic sound is introduced with the sound of
string instruments becoming a higher pitch as the scissors are raised.

17. Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday Time: 2 sec
Shot description – Sammie is shown waking up and quickly sitting up.
Camera movement – Zoom out from a mid-shot of Sammie
Figure movement – Sammie wakes up and quickly sits up
Editing instruction – Cut
Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) –Sammie breathing
heavily is heard

18. Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday
Time: 8 sec
Shot description – The room is shown to be clear of anyone but Sammie and
Russell
Camera movement – Pans around room from Sammies POV
Figure movement – No movement
Editing instruction – Cut
Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) –Sammie breathing
heavily is heard.

19. Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday Time: 1 sec
Shot description – Bedroom door is shown slamming shut
Camera movement –close up of door
Figure movement –None
Editing instruction – Cut
Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) - Looking glass by The
Birthday Massacre is heard on the radio and the sound of the door slamming is
heard.

20. Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday Time: 2 sec
Shot description – Mid shot of Sammie scrambling towards Russell obviously
scared
Camera movement – Tracking shot of Sammie moving towards Russell
Figure movement – Sammie quickly gets up and moves towards Russell
Editing instruction – Cut
Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Looking Glass by The
Birthday Massacre is still playing on the radio.

21. Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday
Time: 2 sec
Shot description – Sammie tries to wake Russell up
Camera movement – over the shoulder shot of Sammie and Russell
Figure movement – Sammie tries to wake Russell up whilst grabbing him whilst
Russell continues being asleep
Editing instruction – Cut
Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Quiet but panicked
Sammie tells Russell to wake up, the radio continues to play.

22. Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday Time: 5 sec
Shot description – Sammie carries on shaking Russell until he wakes up
Shot duration –Camera movement –over the shoulder shot of Sammie looking
at Russell
Figure movement – Sammie is shown shaking Russell quite violently until he
wakes up
Editing instruction – cut
Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) - Panicked Sammie tells
Russell to wake up again, the radio continues to play.

23. Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday Time: 2 sec
Shot description – Close up of Russell waking up fully
Camera movement – Close up of Russell’s face
Figure movement – Russell’s facial reactions show him as groggy still
Editing instruction – cut
Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Looking Glass is still
being played on the radio.

24. Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday Time: 2 sec
Shot description – Two shot of them both jumping when Loud banging is
heard from the attic
Camera movement –Two shot of Sammie and Russell
Figure movement – Both jump when the banging begins
Editing instruction – cut
Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Looking glass is
still playing from the radio. Russell yells ‘What the hell is that?!’

25. Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday Time: 7 sec
Shot description – close up of the bedroom door
Camera movement –close up of the door
Figure movement – no figure movement
Editing instruction – cut
Three soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Banging
continues as the song finishes on the radio.