The document provides feedback on two students' video opening sequences. For Kayleigh Howlin's video, the scary sound effect and close-up shots worked well, but the character could have more movement and speak louder. For Alexa Runussi's video, the close-up shots and flashback scene were effective, but using makeup to show bruises instead of bandages would make the character's injury seem more real. Overall, Alexa's sequence was more engaging due to the close-ups, flashback, and slow motion used.
2. Kayleigh Howlin
Grade B
What Went Well…
A unique name. Very clear
and understand title
The scary sound effect was effective.
Giving us a spooky feel of something
interesting coming.
The close up shots were used well.
3. Kayleigh Howlin
Grade B
Even Better If…
There was more movement in
the character
The Character speaks a bit
louder
The quality was
better
4. Alexa Runussi
Grade A
What Went Well…
Close-up shots were
really good
Flashback was shown
to give us a hint of
what happened.
Slow motion was used
effectively to show the
movement of the
character.
5. Alexa Runussi
Grade A
Even Better If…
The should use make-up to show
the character is hurt (bruises)
instead of plasters to give it a more
real effect.
6. Overall I think that kayleigh Howlin opening sequences was good but needed
to show a clearer understanding of the video. Although I like Alexa Runussi ope
sequence because her close-up’s and the black and white effect for the flashbac
was eye-catching and interesting to watch.
