Error correction article c2.1 2020

1. Erroneous: Nevertheless, this capitalist and individualist system can be harmful, not
only for the environment, but also for our health
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Erroneous: Camper considered the possibility of using plastic waste to fabricate their
shoes.
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Erroneous: The second partnership is with Ecoalf, who is wildly known in Spain for the
usage of recycled plastic in the production of their clothes, and it is called Together.
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Erroneous: a project destined to collect all of the plastic residues found in the sea,
which counts with the collaboration of different fishers from Spain and Thailand.
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Erroneous: Nowadays it is one of the three largest electricity companies in the world
by market capitalisation, as well as being the world leader in renewable energy.
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Erroneous: The most important effort and decision that turned Iberdrola in one of the
largests electricity companies in the world, was the internacional expansion
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Erroneous: Also, they needed to have a balance between open-concept design
and more personal space to please the necessities from those that benefited the
most from and open office but also those who were a bit more introvert

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Erroneous: Samsung’s facility on Silicon Valley
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Erroneous: Fairphone is a Benefit corporation that has won several prices for its fair
labor conditions
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Erroneous: They do a really hard work tracking the supply chain in order to ensure
that the materials come for fair treat mines and not from those governed by war lords
exploiting people in conflict areas
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Erroneous: All mentioned, it is everything about consumers mindset what would have
to change to the better in order to lead into more responsible consumption behavior to
help those who are just not able to get a $500 phone every two years
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Erroneous: In order to help them, Nespresso founded the AAA Academy in Sidamo,
where farmers are equipped with the newest agricultural practices
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3. Erroneous: First of all, the general image of our brand has experimented a great
improvement, receiving amazing critics from newspapers, celebrities and experts.
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