Error correction creative writing 3 e4 2020 key

1. As her dead body is laying on the floor, her students stay in shock.
As her dead body is lying on the floor, her students stay in
shock.
Paco's chances of getting out of this debacle chipped away.
Paco's chances of getting out of this debacle unharmed, were
fading away...
A team of five men in pristine and repellent virus outfits enter the
school and start cleaning the hallways. The protocol written in
case of the COVID-19 is being applicated by the new director of
the University. Maria Gonzales is carried to this position of
Headmistress instead of deceased Cristina by her clout.
A team of five men in pristine and virus-repellent outfits enter
the school and start cleaning the hallways. The protocol
written in case of the COVID-19 is being applied /
implemented by the new director of the University. Maria
Gonzales is promoted to this position of Headmistress
instead of deceased Cristina for / thanks to her clout.
After hours of walking their feet hurt and they all didn't feel like
walking anymore, but the thought of their first long night in Spain
propelled them on
After hours of walking their feet hurt and none of them felt like
walking anymore, but the thought of their first long night in
Spain propelled them on
Therefore, they bought a year's supply of the miracle elixir and
could finally celebrate a whole night. And if they didn't fall asleep,
they're still dancing to this very day.

2. Therefore, they bought a year's supply of the miracle elixir and
could finally celebrate a whole night. And if they hadn’t fallen
asleep they’d still be dancing to this very day!
Through this axis of unity in diversity, FC Bayern enforced under
the legendary Jewish president Kurt Landauer the first German
championship of a Munich football club as early as 1932, before
1860 Munich
Through this axis of unity in diversity, FC Bayern secured,
under (the) legendary Jewish president Kurt Landauer, the
first German championship participation of a Munich football
club as early as 1932, before 1860 Munich
Many people in Germany sheer dislike this trend
Many people in Germany have a sheer aversion for / really
dislike / abhor this trend
She started whingeing about the million bad things that she had
experienced during the week, one more negligible than the other...
She started whingeing about the million bad things that she
had experienced during the week, each more negligible than
the next...
...he loses his balance and the bottle slips out of his hands,
crashing on the ground and leaving a huge wine stain. Vetting his
trousers only sparsely, he continues to go to the checkout
...he loses his balance and the bottle slips out of his hands,
crashing on the ground and leaving a huge wine stain.
Checking his trousers absent-mindedly, he continues to the
checkout
You could feel the expectation of the people wanting for blood, the
clout created around this event.

3. You could feel the expectation of the people longing for blood,
the buzz created around this / the event.
Moctezuma looked at me with predatory eyes and while brushing
the fletching’s with the tip of his fingers made understand that I had
to start running…
Moctezuma looked at me with predatory eyes and while
brushing the fletching with the tip of his fingers, he made it
clear that I had to start running…
.