Error correction 1 c1.2 complu

1. Furthermore, the passion and the fondness every reader
can notice on those words.
Furthermore, every reader can notice the passion
and fondness these words ooze/exude.
I may add Last Summer I went funded by the Ministry of
Social Development and culture let me conduct a research
project based on studying how different or similar could be
families between the five continents.
I might add that last Summer I was granted a
scholarship by the Ministry of Social Development
and culture to conduct a research project consisting
in studying how different or similar families could be
across the five continents.
I believe I am capable of transmit my passion to the
magazine readers and in combination with my writing
skills...
I believe I am capable of transmitting my passion to
the magazine’s readers. Furthermore, my
unparalleled writing skills... ;)
I recently completed my master degree. During my
studies, I have taken a keen interest in gastronomic
journalism...
I recently completed my master’s degree. During my
studies, I took a keen interest in gastronomic
journalism...
First of all, I have to express, as a regular reader of Local
View, my absolutely admiration for yours completely

2. interesting and well certified articles which I think is the
key of yours successful.
First of all, as a regular reader of Local View I have
to express, my absolute admiration for your
extremely interesting and well documented articles
which I think are (the) key to your success.
For example, I collaborate in the organization of the
Healthy Week that took place in some different locals and
restaurants of our city.
For example, I collaborated with the organization of
the Healthy Week that took place in different venues
and restaurants of our city.
I am sure that events such as this and good eating advises
would be of great interest to your readers, and I feel that
with my academic formation as well as my knowledge of
local restaurants I would played an active role writing
about these topics in your magazine.
I am sure that events such as these and good
nutritional pieces of advice would be of great
interest to your readers. Besides, I feel that with my
academic training and my knowledge of local
restaurants, I would fit perfectly in/on your team.
I contributed to the organization of 4 of the last year's
events. Two of them were concerts by a local singers and
music bands and the other two were art expositions.
Last year I contributed to the organization of several
events. Two of them were concerts by local singers

3. and music bands and the other two were art
exhibitions.
... I'm a regular reader of local View. Firstly, due to I didn't
know anything of the town and secondly because I really
love the remarkably well written articles.
... I'm a regular reader of local View. Firstly because
I have only been living here for a week so I
desperately need your advice as to what to do with
my spare time and secondly because I quite like
your remarkably well written articles.
Please find attach a review of the last concert I could
enjoy "Mabu" on the concert hall "Galileo".
Please find attached a review of the last Mabu
concert I went to, in/at the "Galileo” concert hall.
I was working during 3 months in Paidsport sports Center
as cycling monitor and I was practising CrossFit
I worked as a cycling monitor during 3 months for
Paidsport sports center where I also practised
CrossFit
I feel I can join in the team you were creating during all
these years
I feel I could join the team you have been creating
during all these years
Unfortunately two years ago I suffered a damage in my
back and I had to leave the practice of sports

4. Unfortunately two years ago I suffered an injury in
my back and I had to quit sports altogether.
I know I could make a good job in your magazine because
I have a good knowledge of all events in neighborhood due
to my job in District and I hope you had it in consideration
I know I could do a good job in your magazine
because I have excellent knowledge of ongoing
events in the neighborhood due to my job in District
and I hope you take it into consideration
I am a third-year University student studying literature. I
am very much in touch with cultural events such as
theaters and poetry recitals that organized young people.
I am a third-year literature student at the University
of Salford. I am very much in touch with cultural
events such as theatre plays and poetry recitals
organized by young people.