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1. Please consider hire one Chinese speaking agent so that
we could rest in conditions.
Please consider hiring another Chinese-speaking
agent so that we can finally take a rest.
The first solution would be for a friend, whose career as
engineer is magnificent, to replace me. The second option
would be that I work remotely for a few days until I can
join the company, with a lower salary.
The first solution would be for a friend, whose
career as an engineer is magnificent, to replace me.
The second option would be that I work remotely for
a few days (on/with a lower salary) until I can join
the company properly.
There has been an unfortunate situation that unables me
to start working at the date we agreed.
There has been an unfortunate situation which sadly
makes it impossible for me to start working on the
date we agreed.
I hope that we can find a solution to this problem together
so that everyone can be satisfied with the results.
I hope that we can find a mutually satisfactory
solution to this problem.
I'm writing to apply for the job as a museum guide that
your organization disclosed on the Times newspaper the
past 3rd March.

2. I'm writing to apply for the job as a museum guide
that your organization published in The Times on the
3rd
of March.
For this reason and having just finished my master's
degree in modern art I consider nowadays to be the ideal
moment to apply for this great opportunity
For this reason and having just finished my Master's
degree in Modern Art, this is the ideal moment to
apply for/to this great job opportunity.
If you take a look to my CV, i've been working as a
museum guide in Spain...
If you take a look at my CV, I have been working as
a museum guide in Spain... (provided you are still
working as a museum guide of course)
Assuming the valuable opportunity that would carry to
work in your museum, I hope my profile gathers all the
requisites which you are searching on applicants.
As / since I regard this as a great opportunity, I
hope my profile matches/fulfills all the requirements
mentioned in the job advert.
Lamentably, I have encountered the obligation to write to
you at such a late stage concerning my scheduled date of
incorporation. I'm afraid my availability on the intended
day is no longer possible.
Sadly/regrettably, I am afraid I will be unable to
start working on the scheduled date since…

3. Therefore, what I propose is considering a brief delay of 2
days in order that I can resolve that issue and get down to
the job.
Therefore, what I propose is to consider a brief 2-
day delay in order that I can resolve / in order for
me to resolve / so that I can resolve that issue and
get down to the job.
Should you make me aware if you are in favour with my
proposal
Would you mind confirming whether my proposal
has met with your approval?
I'm writing to you due to I have had a problem this week
I'm writing (to) you because I have had a problem
this week
I have to take care of my son. As far as I know he's going
to be in the hospital for some personal reasons which are
struggling us. (something doesn’t struggle you  you
struggle with something)
I have to take care of my son. Unfortunately he's
going to be in the hospital where he will be kept
under observation for some time.
Although, the situation is kind of a bit difficult to control.
As I have been told that the company don't have enough
employees in that season. It's impossible to me to arrange
another plans.

4. However, I’m aware that the situation is likely to be
difficult to solve as I have been told that the
company is understaffed this season. That (being)
said, I’m afraid it is completely impossible for me to
make other arrangements…
Unfortunately my grandmother had suffered a household
accident and since then she has been in the hospital. After
the fall the doctor orders she not move until the fracture is
cured. However she did not heed for his indication and
now she is going to be operated in the next weeks.
Unfortunately my grandmother suffered a household
accident and since then she has been in the hospital.
After the fall, the doctor ordered she not move until
the fracture has/had healed. However she did not
heed his advice and she is going to be operated on /
is going to undergo surgery (again?) in the next
weeks.
I feel extremely fortunate of working at your department
and I’m greatly motivate with the job offer.
I feel extremely fortunate to be given the
opportunity to work within your department and I’m
greatly motivated by your job offer.
Unfortunately yesterday I knew that there was a problem
with my visa
Unfortunately, I found out / realised / learnt
yesterday that there was / had been a problem with
my visa

5. I hope I do not cause too much problems to the company
and to resolve as soon as possible this situation.
I hope I do not cause too many problems to the
company and will do my utmost to resolve this
situation as soon as possible