This document appears to be a draft script for a story about a girl named Jessie who is bullied at her new school. In the first scene, she nervously enters her English class where the teacher and students bully her. Later, alone on the school field crying, Jessie wishes to be loved and have friends. She is then pulled into a tornado which transforms her appearance. In subsequent scenes, Jessie discovers she can now read minds and turns one of her bullies into ice with her new power.
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FADE IN:
1A.
EXT. IN FRONT OF THE SCHOOL GATES - MORNING
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Jessie walks through the college gates with her head held
down.
DISSOLVES TO:
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INT. ENGLISH CLASS - MORNING
MR.BILROAD
(angry and snappy)
Hello! You must be JESSIE. Go take
a seat so I can get on with this
lesson!!
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JESSIE
(nervous and scared)
Y-yyes s-ssir
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SWITCHES TO:
Jessie walks towards the desk. Everyone around her are
giggling and throwing paper balls at her and calling her
names.
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Scene cuts to the teacher.
MR.BILROAD
Shut up! Who knows the definition
of powers?!
ROSIE
(confident)
Power is me!
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SIMON
(giggling,enthusiastic
turns and looks at
Jessie)
Maybe Mary Poppins knows the
answer..
The class laugh and teacher giggles.
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MR.BILROAD
(Shouts)
Jessie come to the front. NOW!
JESSIE nervously walks towards the front when suddenly she
gets tripped up by SIMON, and falls to the floor. Jessie
tries to pick herself up but trips up on her skirt again.
(whole class laughing,
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calling names. Teacher is
also giggling.)
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DISSOLVE TO:
2aA.
EXT. ON THE ISOLATED BENCH ON THE FIELD- MOMENTS LATER
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Jessie is sitting on the bench on her own crying.
JESSIE
(sobbing, over voice)
Why?! Why don't I have friends? no
one knows me! Where ever I go I'm
unwanted! Why god?
(screaming in her mind
and crying)
Why god?! What have I done wrong?!
I my a waste of space on earth? I
don't even have one friend! I'm
ugly is that why?!!
(pleading. Whispers)
Please god! I just want friends,
respect, be pretty and to be
loved!!
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A bright light across the sky, before she knew it she was
pulled into a tornado. As she spins around and around in the
tornado; her hair unfolds, her clothes change and her braces
are no longer there.
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CUT TO:
2aB.
JESSIE IS LEFT ON THE FLOOR NEAR THE BENCH. AS SHE WAKES UP
SHE FINDS HERSELF PERFECTLY FINE THE WAY SHE WAS DRESSED.
JESSIE GETS SOME FLASH BACKS FROM THE TORNADO BUT IGNORES
IT.
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JUMP CUT TO:
2aC.
INT. CANTEEN
- MOMENTS LATER
JESSIE WALKS THROUGH THE CANTEEEN AND IS ABLE TO HEAR
EVERYON THOUGHTS, SHE HEARS SIMON AND FOCUSES ON HIS
THOUGHTS.
SIMON
Is she okay? I'm not going to ask
her. Maybe I was too harsh on her.
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Jessie turns and looks at simon.
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SIMON
(whispers)
oh crap! is she looking at me?!
(shouts out loud)
Marry Poppins has entered the
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Moddy:we might have a problem with the gates.
sharmin yousuf Nov 15, 2013 1:47 PM
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Moddy: dont like the name.
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Moddy: good emotions to use to show she isn't used to things.
sharmin yousuf Nov 15, 2013 1:48 PM
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Transition needed?
sharmin yousuf Nov 15, 2013 1:49 PM
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Bit too rough to start
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Caleb: its good to have contrasting characters.
sharmin yousuf Nov 15, 2013 1:51 PM
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Moddy: action
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Caleb: The teacher giggles? What...
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Caleb: good description
sharmin yousuf Nov 15, 2013 1:59 PM
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Caleb: what!
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Moddy: where abouts isn the school?
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Caleb: It seems unrealistic in the sence that it is too open for
someone who is bullied.
sharmin yousuf Nov 15, 2013 2:03 PM
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Caleb: TELLS TOO MUCH
sharmin yousuf Nov 15, 2013 2:01 PM
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Caleb: Good. Shows transformation but also show clear nataivity.
sharmin yousuf Nov 15, 2013 2:05 PM
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Caleb; good. But should be startled.
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CALEB; GOOD. SHOWS POSSIBLE FRIEND POTENTIAL.
sharmin yousuf Nov 15, 2013 2:08 PM
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Could use a whisper voice.
sharmin yousuf Nov 15, 2013 2:09 PM
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Caleb: it feels very sudden and unbait; maybe the tornado could just
be her power.
sharmin yousuf Nov 15, 2013 2:10 PM
