2. I have added skyline at the top of the page which saying “The
best pop magazine ever” and I have add different colours on the
word ‘Pop’ and ‘Ever’
I have also changed the background again to blue instead of
white, because it looks more colourful and more sophisticated
I have changed the cover lines and the splash’s font type to ‘Thin
cool font’ which I have download it from Dafont.com
I have added another cover line which saying ‘2016 fasion tips’
I have separated Josh’s cover line and I have increased the size
of the words ‘Josh Macqueen’ and decrease the size of ‘the rising
pop star talks awards’
Josh’s cover line has been rewrite to ‘The rising pop star talks
awards’ instead of ‘Interview with the rising pop star’
Josh’s image and the red box has been moved behind Alina’s
arms and rotated to right as well as making inner shadow behind
it, which makes him stand out.
FRONT PAGE
3. Kris’s image has been moved from bottom right to bottom left
Kris’s cover line has been moved next to her image and the
font type has been changed to ‘Arial’
The barcode, website and the date has been moved from
bottom left to bottom right
Alina’s image has been moved and slight covered the
masthead.
The headline has been rotated back to normal horizontal
I have changed the date to ‘August 2015’ instead of
‘24.8.2015’
FONT PAGE (CONT.)
4. I have added wrote some introduction for some of the page at
the left content, and I have delete some of the page numbers
as I haven’t got enough space to write the introduction
I have added the social media information of the magazine in
the ‘check out the popcorn’ boxes, instead of text which
saying it
I have added the letter ‘P’ at the back of each events
I have changed the word ‘Chart’ to ‘Charts’ and ‘Coming event’
into ‘Coming events’
I have added the page number in the images
I have changed the font type of ‘coming events’ as the same
as the masthead
I have delete the Justin Bieber’s event
CONTENT PAGE
5. I have changed the font type to ‘Thin cool font’, which is the
same as my cover line on the first page.
I have changed the introduction article and make it bigger
I have changed the font type on the main article as the same
on my content page
I have changed the background of the triangle to red colour
and I have changed the copy to blue and changed the don’t so
it isn’t serif
I have changed the pull quotes not to be all capital and they
are placed between the columns
I have changed the text on the main article smaller
I have added another pull quote on the second page
DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD
6. I have moved the pictures of Alina on the second page to the
bottom right of the first page
I have changed the font type of 21 to the same of 22
I have changed the quantitation mark to speech mark on the
headline
I have changed the size of the ‘POPCORN’ logo
I have made the first paragraph of the main copy in bold and
drop caps at the beginning of all paragraph
DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD (CONT.)
