The document discusses several proposals for investing funds in the local community, including providing babysitting services for those without time or money; selecting interested students for projects based on their strengths; working with social work students on a placement; using increased bike use to develop a less polluted environment; and protecting young trees with frames and watering them weekly. The overall goal is to suggest how university funds could be invested to benefit the local economy and community in the mid-term.
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Common mistakes cae proposal
1. Another good idea would be to provide our community
with a service of babysitting for those people who don't
have neither time nor money to afford it.
Another good idea would be to provide our community
with a service of babysitting for those people who have
neither time nor money to afford it.
It is recommended that the selection of the interested
students should depend on the subjects that are their
strength.
It is recommended that the selection of interested
students depend on the subjects they are good at.
I would strongly recommend that the funds will be
invested in this new "home".
I (would) strongly recommend that the funds be invested
in this new "home".
In regard of the staff, our plan is to work together with the
social care students from the Moratalaz School providing
this new option for their course practise and reducing the
cost of our proposal.
In regard to the staff, our plan is to work together with the
social work students from the Moratalaz School
thus/thereby providing them with a new option for their
work placement and reducing the cost of our proposal.
Being increased the use of bikes, citizens will not only
have a new option of transport, but also would be helping
to develop a less contaminating and healthy cohabitation
system.
2. The use of bikes having increased, citizens will not only
have a new option of transport, but they will also be
helping to develop a less contaminating and healthier
urban environment.
Independently of where we are at any time, we are always
connected to our friends... (not incorrect just not quite
idiomatic)
No matter/Regardless of where we are at any time, we are
always connected to our friends...
Obviously, new technologies always call the attention of
the old people.
Obviously, new technologies always catch the attention of
old people / the old / the elderly.
In this way, it could be made contact with a high range of
population.
In this way, a wide range of population could be
contacted.
When walking around our village, it is impressive to see
the amount of homeless dogs wandering around the place.
When walking around our village, it is
shocking/alarming/striking to see the number of stray
dogs wandering around the place.
In my personal view, the help that my colleagues give to
our community is barely low.
3. In my personal view, the help that my fellow students give
to our community is barely sufficient / not nearly enough.
The volunteer responsible of autistic students should be
able to use pictures...
The volunteer responsible for autistic students should be
able to use pictures...
...volunteers, between 17 and 30 years old joining this
program should have a special interest of working with
special-needs children...
...volunteers, between 17 and 30 years of age joining this
program should have a special interest in working with
special-needs children...
...young trees should be protected by a framework and
watered at least once a week.
...young trees should be protected by a frame and watered
at least once a week.
On the whole, this would enable that a mid-term increase
of local economy would happen.
On the whole, this would foster/trigger/spur a mid-term
upturn of the local economy.
The principal objective of this proposal is to suggest ways
in which could be invested the university founds in order
to...
4. The principal objective of this proposal is to suggest ways
in which the university funds could be invested in order
to...
She settles down the atmosphere of a strict caste rule and
centuries of traditions.
1. She sets the atmosphere of a strict caste rule and
centuries of traditions.
2. Set against the backdrop of a strict caste rule and…