letter

1. ©opyright Heroes
Film house
Baldock, Herts SG7 6DZ
Web: www.copyrightheroes.co.uk
14th October 2014
Dear Harriet and Victoria,
Thank you very much for your presentation dated 14th October. It was a good insight into your
progress and ideas so far considering how you can help address the problem of digital piracy and intellectual
property.
From watching your presentation, I can see that you had a good understanding of the task, with interesting
ideas and a well planned presentation. You clearly work well as a team. You also made some good
comments about your survey and results, along with the issues that the results raised. Your presentation was
good, with good eye contact and interesting slides.
To be successful, continue with what you are doing and ensure all choices carefully consider the demands of
the brief. There may be some elements which require more information – such as ideas for your campaign
products.
Overall, I feel that the presentation was very good, with some good links to the task and brief.
I look forward to seeing how your ideas develop and how you take on board the advice given here and the
feedback from those also watching your presentation.
I look forward to the week beginning 9th December when I get to see the development of your campaign and
some draft work.
Remember to keep referring to the brief so you stay focused on the task.
Sincerely,
ESim
On behalf of Copyright Heroes.