19. Polite endings
Looking forward to your reply,
Hoping to hear from you soon,
Thank you very much in advance,
Kind regards,
Best regards,
Regards,
Have a very nice day!
20. Attachments
Please find enclosed…
Enclosed you will find a copy of our…
I’m sending you … with this email.
21. Message structure
Salutation Dear Ms Martínez,
Message How are you?
Polite ending Looking forward to your reply,
Signature Daniel Peñalver
22. Message formality
Less formal More formal
Hello Bego, Dear Ms Martínez,
Blah, blah, blah… Blah, blah, blah…
Blah, blah, blah… Blah, blah, blah…
Blah, blah, blah… Blah, blah, blah…
Talk to you soon, Looking forward to your reply,
Dani Daniel Peñalver
23. Payment terms
You can pay in three easy installments.
We offer fixed monthly repayments at attractive
interest rates.
Pay in easy, interest-free installments.
24.
25.
26. Email booking exercise
Let’s book a table for a large party!
Let’s send the client some menus to choose from!
27. First email: enquiry
1. Source of address
2. Say what you require (quote, information)
3. Ask for some menu samples
4. As about terms of payment
5. Polite ending
28. Second email: booking
1. Reference to enquiry
2. Reference to menu chosen
3. Number of people in the party
4. Payment
5. Validity of offer and instructions
6. Polite ending
29. Third email:
acknowledgement
1. Reference to order
2. Confirmation (or modification, or refusal)
3. Price, discount, payment.
4. Instructions, arrangements
5. Request for confirmation
6. Polite ending
30. Fourth email: payment
1. Reference to delivery
2. Confirmation or complaint
3. Reference to payment or invoice
4. Polite ending
33. Complaints
Listen
Can I speak to the owner?
Acknowledge
Apologise
Solve
Refunds
Exchanges
Thank
34.
35. Top complaints
What’s taking so long for our dinners? – Waiting too
long…
To be seated
To have orders taken “I will be with you shortly”
For food to arrive “Your food is on its way”
For more drinks to arrive “Will you have more wine?”
Something is wrong with the food
At arrival
At table check
36. Complaints about food
My steak was undercooked.
My steak was overcooked.
My food is cold
My pasta is too well done
39. Complaints about drinks
My drink is too strong.
My drink isn’t strong enough.
My drink doesn’t have enough ice.
My drink has too much ice.
My soda / beer is flat.
40.
41. Complaints about tables
It’s too noisy
We’ll turn down the music
It’s too hot / It’s too cold
We’ll turn on the AC
We’ll turn on the heat
It’s too dark / It’s too bright
We’ll brighten the room
We’ll switch off this light
It’s too busy
42.
43. Complaints about the bill
Overcharge
“I didn’t order this”
Wrong change
Wrong portion size
Quality of the food
46. Apologies
I’m very sorry about that. / I’m terribly sorry about
that.
I fully understand the inconvenience this has
caused.
I’m sorry but I’m afraid I can’t help you.
47.
48. Apologies
I’m sorry but you’ll have to talk to our manager about
that.
I’m very sorry about the delay / the mistake / the
mix-up / the damage
Please accept our apologies for this.
49. A noisy environment!
Sorry, again?
I’m sorry. Could you say that again?
I’m sorry, I didn’t catch that. Could you repeat it?
I’m sorry but it’s very noisy here today. Could you
speak a little louder, please?
50.
51. On the phone
Requests for information
Prices and discounts
Sizes / Features
Delivery
Payment
Complaints
53. Calling back
Good Morning, Mesón El Faro, can I help you?
Yes, could I speak to Ana Michelle Ono, please?
Yes madam, I’ll put you through.
Yes, could I speak to Ana Michelle Ono, please?
Sorry, she’s not available at the moment, can I take a
message?
54. Booking
Good morning, Mesón El Faro, how can I help you?
I’d like to book a table for three, for next Friday at
3pm.
Friday at 3pm, three people. Would you like to order
any special dish?
Yes, I would like to order the rabbit paella, for the
three of us.
55. Booking
Very good. What is your name, madam?
My name is Anna Ono.
Very well, Ms Ono. May I have your telephone
number, please?
My phone number is 968 12 34 56.
OK, 968 12 34 45. Thank you very much Ms Ono.
Thank you, bye, bye.
56. Problems!
Oh, I’m sorry. I must have dialled the wrong
number!
I’m sorry. Could you say that again?
I’m sorry, I didn’t catch that. Could you repeat it?
Could you spell that word for me, please?
What was the name again? I didn’t catch it.
57. Problems!
I’m sorry but it’s a very bad line. Could you phone
back in two minutes?
I’m sorry but it’s a very bad line. Could you speak a
little louder, please?
I’m sorry but I can’t make out what you’re saying.
Would you like to call later?
I’m sorry but we seem to have been cut off last
time. If it happens again I’ll call you back.
58. Saying goodbye
Is there anything else I can do for you Ms Ono / sir /
madam?
That’s all, thank you.
You’re welcome, and thanks for your booking.
Thank you for calling.
Have a nice day.
60. Reference
Communication for Business, by Birgit Abegg and Michael Benford.
Steak temperatures, common complaints:
http://www.howtogetyourfoodspitin.com/2007/12/top-10-complaints-heard-in-
restaurants.html
61. Credits
Restaurant La Boheme (La Boheme Restaurant & Cocktail Lounge)
http://www.flickr.com/photos/uniquehotelsgroup/5692227631/
Sweet Temptations
http://www.flickr.com/photos/adforce1/4420985385/
American Idols
http://www.flickr.com/photos/iboy_daniel/83909206/sizes/l/in/photostream/
¡Ole! Project 365(3) Day 124
http://www.flickr.com/photos/elwillo/5803408244/sizes/l/in/photostream/
Chicken Paella Close-up
http://www.flickr.com/photos/avlxyz/447638440/sizes/o/in/photostream/